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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Many countries have a large population of young people. While some people believe that this is advantageous, others opine that having older people in society also is beneficial for countries. In my opinion, having a/the right mix of young people and older ones is essential for maintaining the proper balance. Nowadays, young generation are important for economic development. In fact, younger people are dynamic, smart, healthy and more productive than the older generation as well. For instance, young adults are usually healthier than older ones and therefore governments spend less on healthcare system. Instead of spending money on healthcare, authorities can invest this money on in preventive healthcare. Moreover, young people are highly better educated and more skillful in various fields of technology such as engineering and medicalmedicine. Consequently, they are active workforce. As all we know, governments collect a major percentage of their tax/revenue from the young people, hence the taxperyers’ money invested in many other parts sectors of country are is more beneficial. On the other hand, having many older people in countries who are full experienced, many people do not have anypresents an exceptional opportunity for the youth to learn theirolder people experiences and knowledge. In my view, we need to be guided by them in many difficult situations such as running the country or managing a business. Whereaswhereas, governments know that taking care of older people has a great cost for countries. In conclusion, although I believe that we need both young and older people in a the right proportion, although I concede that this ia a topic which having more young and older generation sparks a great controversy among people.

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