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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Today, the modernized lifestyle and the presence of technology have changed the way of human living. In the ancient times, people were working until they were not able to move physically. With the passage of time the rate of rough work has declined and now people do some office work or maybe work with some special machines in factories. Moreover, an extremely important factor to have a long life span is rooted in hygiene. Although through development of the hygiene, the individuals’ life span is lasted that means there are more workforce today, but as a result of hardscrabble life which they have confronted, there is also a necessity to have a long term rest time for them. One reason for those who claim that individuals should also work after their retirement period is that there is a need for all walks of life society to contribute to society all walks of life to work well at old ages too. There is a fact that the old generation burden huge responsibilities on governments such as health insurance services, different convenient facilities in the city and some consulting social courses to prevent them from depression. Most of the time, retires still have a lot of energy to work and also have much more experience to cooperate to society and in their specific field, it is true society should not miss them after thirty years of work. It takes much time and many expenses to form such individuals for a community. Cleary, in some poor countries which are almost located in Far East, Middle East or Africa in which some of population of retires work again to fulfill their needs due to recession of economy. Without a doubt, they have no other choices to live a life and this situation will become worst after a certain time when they will suffer from specific diseases in the future. Obviously, through such a hectic lifestyle which human beings have faced, it is not acceptable that they have to choose other jobs for the rest of their life. It is undeniable not only should they need to rest and have a stress-relief life after a while, but also they will need some special treatment as they will get old. No matter how they work hard or earn somewhat money, they desire to have a long day-off for the rest of their living. Unlike our ancestors who almost were farmer or probably miner and had a rough and physical duty, it may illustrate that they needed more time for resting, but we as new generations who struggle with AI and the difficulties of modern world need more rest time than those. Overall, I have to say that because of the speed of our age and life, there must be an optional choice for everyone to select what is suit their situation. Sometimes, rules make people’s life more complicated and different too. It is a direct responsibility for governments of countries to find a feasible solution for this issue.

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