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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? With developing technology and merging with people’s lives with, in this day and age, the tendency of using computer has increased especially among children and youths. It is, however, important to considering the both negative and positive effects of using it. I tend to agree with the opinion, arguing the positive effects of it rather than one. With modifications of the world, these days, people face sharp technological improvement, encouraging and forcing them to adapt themselves to, so it is clear that young children and the youth automatically need to spend considerably their time behind the computer to learn how to search and get information, becoming up to date, hence the positive effects of using computer on children. On the other hand, using computer has some harmful effects such as damaging eyes or body posture. Although people have to learn using technological equipment to can afford doing their duties and daily lives, they should aware of their damaging impacts. Thus, some are believed that the negative effects of utilizing computer are more than its advantages. Totally, by considering both sides, we can easily understand that nevertheless will using computer damages people’s health, they have to use it and it is necessary for everyone to improve their abilities. Moreover, they should adapt themselves to the speed of upgrading technology. Hence, I agree with advantages of using computer in comparison of disadvantages.

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