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Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Although some might prefer to work hard inorder to apply a higher level in their career, other’s priority, in contrast, might be hanging around with family and friends. While I do not consider any of the mentioned ideas completely wrong, I do believe in the existence of both in life which brings happiness and tranquility. On one hand, in such arduous lifetime which any individual is struggling to provide a comparatively convenient life for himself and his family as well, working hard is a key factor toward this attitude. Meanwhile, promotion in any person’s career might create an opportunity which directly effects on the financial aspects of his life. The piece of evidence show that the more financially progressed a family is, the more relief environment the members of the family would benefit from. As an example, being able to afford a fully facilitated school for children, one family in comparison with those who have to send their children to a low-quality school due to the tuition, absolutely will feel more satisfied and less worried about the future of the child’s life. On the other hand, life is full of features which are not affordable at any prices.to illustrate more, being totally occupied with the job, one may provide every needing items, but rarely would he have time to see the most beautiful moments that his juveniles are growing up. Therefore, when it comes to the end he would feel nothing, but regretful for the time that he had on hand but only spent on working. The time that he has no chance to return back and restart his life with joy. In conclusion, in my point of view, inorder to fulfill all needs of life, in the other word, for a prosperous life, an appropriate balance amongst both demanding progress in one’s career and spending time with the ones who he loves.

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