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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four or five years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views? Starting to learn institutional education at a very young age is more preferable in some teaching systems and in the other ones they start conventional schooling at 7 or 8. I believe that the latter approach is more accurate and starting formal educations in older ages would not create any problems/make any trouble for kids. First of all, the a more important issue than learning formal education for the young, is to learn how to be a better person inside the society. There are lots of valuable topics for them to learn such as creativity. Being creative could help a person far better than academical education in the work placespace or his/her routine life. In my experience, there are many people who create a better life only because of their creativity and even though they did not have any significant/magnificent degree, they were extremely successful in their life. So, training our children to be more creative has more priority than formal education Not only should our young generation be creative, but also we should teach them some social skills for the time they start becoming a member of our community. Learning to be a part of team and co-operate with other members of it is really necessary nowadays. Moreover, the ability of communicating with others and making new friends is so important. So/therefore, practicing with our kids to be more sociable would be more important than conventional education. In conclusion, as the formal education is important to raise more educated kids, there are some more important skills which are needed to be learned first and these kinds of skills had is better to be learned in younger ages and institutional educations can be started later.

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