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Many people believe that woman make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as woman at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Traditionally till the modern age in most societiesy woman were hold held responsible to take care of their offspring and raising raise the children, and men were the one who would be the breadwinner of the family and the financial supporter, however, this trend has undergone go into changes recently and some believe that both the woman and the man should be held responsible for this key parenting role. In my opinion both man and woman are responsible and it is up to the couple that should to decide whom of themwhich one can plays a key role in this regard. Firstly, as mentioned earlier woman before the modern age was not truly involved in business and the society views man to be the protector of the family. But, this point of view has been challenged in the modern era and woman has fight fought for their freedom. In this regard now it has beenis largely believed that both man and woman can get their independent salary and work outside the house, so, as some of the mothers are working, the responsibility for raising a child should be incumbent on both on man and woman. On the other hand, one might say that woman due to their traits and characteristics are more capable of raising a child in comparison to a fellow man. This traditional way of thinking suggests that woman can better support the children emotionally and raise them in a better way to be well-equipped for getting into the society and man can be the advisor in this way. Although, this strength point of woman which is their emotional help cannot be denied, I believe that the woman itself herself should have the option to decide which role she wants to play, as it has been proved that woman can be a good mother and a good employee at the same time. In a nutshell, I want to emphasize that although generally I believe that woman can be a better emotional supporter for a child, she should make her choice. In addition the man has the same responsibility as a parent for a child. Time: 28 mins

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