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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. It is common knowledge that in these days, buying a house is a much safer way to invest money. But this is only a one-dimensional way of thinking. When it comes to talking about wisely spending money wisely, It is my firm conviction that buying a business includes upsides such as having a prolific investment, creating jobs for others and pursuing personal interest that not only outweigh but also outnumber its downsides, on the following grounds. First and foremost, it is necessary here to clarify exactly what is meant by having a "prolific investment." Compared to buying a house which will bring bought to you a stagnant finance, if you buy a business, you will be able to have your money in circulation which will be definitely meritable more profitable/lucrative in comparison with buying a house. In the second place, I need to be explicit about creating jobs for others. By means of acquiring a business you are capable of establishing a wide spectrum of fields of working for other people, which is hardly seen through other ways of money investment. The last but not least, I feel obliged to account for pursuing personal interest. Certainly each of us has some inner passions and goals in our field of occupation. In from my point of view, through having a personal business, it will be easily practical to follow these particular objectives. To make a long story short, although buying a house would sound like a much more comfortable way to spend your money, but it will not be able to provide you with noticeable circumstanceswonderful opportunities as purchasing a business does. 263 words

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