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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Given that it has today been a common practice for children to use electronic devices such as computers constantly all over the world, its advantages or the downsides are a moot point which most of the parents are dealing with. First and foremost, I opine that since overuse of computers has regrettably received wide currency among the children in this day and age, they are more susceptible to being negatively affected. In other words, in terms of health, not only is does their body be influenced physically but also such activities have a various array of mental impacts. For instance, those who are used to sitting in front of a screen for a multitude of hours in succession will generally get ill owing to changes in their physical posture and also their eye sight. In addition, depending on the content of programs or games, such children are normally prone to be self-directed and insensitive to others in psychological/emotional terms. Moreover, given that they spend a plenty of time in the virtual world, most of the parents are concerned for their charges’ soft skills such as team work and face to face communications, particularly for their future. Therefore, my firm conviction is that only if parents put their every effort into supervising their offspring’s virtual activities, will we have more qualified young descendants in future. On the other hand, the overt advantages of state-of-the-art technology cannot be denied at all. Since, most of the main activities are done through the Internet, children ought to learn how to work with novel devices and applications so as to prevent avoidfrom lagging behind their peers at schools and also in future. Other than parents, I strongly believe an efficient education system has much of a role to play in fostering pupils’ expertise in this regard. Quality training, especially in elementary schools brings about up/nurture/raise more skillful students which in turn leads to paving the path to have more professional young adults in future. Consequently, in my opinion, use of computers is a positive activity per se provided children plan to work with it in moderation, otherwise whose their/its negative effects will outweigh positive ones significantly.