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In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules? An appropriate behavior with/toward children and adolescence, now, is regarded as a fundamental issue. Many believe that this matter is a vital factor in the future of humanity. In most societies, children likely face firm behavioral rules to follow; whereas, their counterparts in other places are not made to follow, obey, observe, respect chase specific laws. The question is as to which of these trends could be considered the most efficient approach to take? Society might encounter/face serious problems if children are raised with severe rules; that is, being a coward is the most probable result of tight restrictions. To put it another way, children have insufficient bravery to pursue their interests; hence, society will probably suffer from a lack of creativity and braveness of people. Due to the nature of the penalty coming experienced infrom childhood, in the future they will be adults withare often conservative attitudes, so they do not tend to express themselves clearly. The lack of innovation/creativity/brainchild in Iranian’s company companies is the best example of this view. Freedom in all the affairs, on the other hand, may contribute to bringing up (upbringing of) a child as an irresponsible individual in his life. According to psychologists believe rules can play a crucial role in responsibility since children are accountable for their actions. Apart from this, a considerable number of people believe that children who are allowed to act freely generally will be rude and aggressive people. For instance, plenty of anti-social behaviors have resulted from limitless actions. In conclusion, although freedom in events can lead to more creativity, self-esteem, and courage, in the meantime has have its their own drawbacks as well. From my point of view, moderation is the best course which should be taken in all affairs otherwise both groups of children will face difficulties during their adult life.s

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