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Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we reverse this trend? What punishment methods should be used, in your opinion? Todays, many societies are confronting with a drastic rise in the level of crime among the youth. Many communities are being brought in to help combat this crime wave. I strongly believe that some grounds such as dysfunctional family structure and economic crisis crises lie at the heart of this problem. To begin with, there is no doubt that one of the main reasons of this worrying concern is financial crisis which gives rise to poverty. That is to say, some destitute individuals cannot afford to educate their children in at school because the youth have to work hard in some unsafe conditions to offer assistance to their family for making their ends meet. Therefore, the more the youth spend their decent time on their studies, the less they turn to petty crimes such as pickpocketting or shoplifting. Moreover, parents’ hectic life contributes to work round the clock which causes them to fail to look after their children. Not only does lack of great supervision leads to some mental problems for children, but also children have to spend most of their times on the internet in order to play games or watch violence violent videos which may has have an devastating impact on children’s behavior since they try to imitate the main character of these films or games. Nevertheless, the increased rate of crime is mirrored elsewhere in society so some measures should be taken into account to crackdown on crime. Firstly, youth awareness programs can highlight the importance of education for children that which hashave a pivotal effect on the development of a conscience which helps them learn the distinction between right and wrong. Another measure to tackle this issue is that parents should provide a healthy atmosphere to pay more attention to their children while nurturing them. Lastbut not least, families should monitor their children’s activity on the internet or electronic media. To conclude, my firm conviction is that parents and the government should put in place some measures by establishing some punishments which fit the crime such as obligatory community services as well as fining them. Such sanctions penalties should be appropriate for law breakers who do not reach the age of reason because carpal corporal punishments or imprisonment might spoil their character as well as reduce reducing their self-esteem.