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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this? Child labor is a controversial subject that is followed by so many people and organizations, in particular, NGOs. They express that paid work can result in negative effects for children and their life and therefore it must be banned in all countries. The importance of education, the mental and physical side effects and the great value of playing are the main grounds that can be underlined. First of all, there is a widely agreed view that education bring about so many positive implications for their future. Education is highly correlated with good job opportunities and hence it is of significant importance to be well educated. Not only child labor reduce the possibility of studying and going to school, but also affect their mentality about an standard job for future. Therefore, parents should take these issues into consideration and not permit them to work. Secondly, work environments are not suitable for children. Beside hard physical situations, they may face different mental problems. Usually, circumstances in which children work are designed for adults and they may be in danger of child abuse. Furthermore, it may has negative impacts on their health and causing some diseases for them. Moreover, interaction with adults especially whom they are unfamiliar with can put them in danger of bullying, sexual harassment and so on. Although there can be some safe work environments, its the disadvantages overweight the possible advantages. In addition, there is a growing consensus that creativity plays a key role in successful future and barely can we find any basis for that except playing. There is no doubt that taking responsibility can make a difference in their growth but nowadays it is generally accepted that parents are able to teach taking responsibility through playing like enforcing them to protect and gather their play toys.To sum up, benefits of paid work are not considered as a justifiable excuse for child labor especially regarding its drawbacks. Family is the best possible choice for raising children and parents have the responsibility of boosting their qualities.

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