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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? During children’s growth, one of the essential points of their education is learning how to distinguish between right and wrong at early age. Many parents consider different kind of punishments as an educational process to their children. I disagree with the necessity of punishments and I believe there are some other ways which have more advantages for child’s development. As far as I am concerned, physical punishment is the worst way of teaching a lesson to a child which a parent or a teacher can use. On this way, besides of its illegal aspects, not even it does not have any positive effects on a child, but also may ruin individual’s life for good. This kind of brutality is influencing directly on the child’s mental and his/hers emotions. Normally, children who suffer from physical abuse are more prone to become anti social or even a law breaker in future. Even though we always hear about child abuses in news, many psychologists, believe that using specific penalizes for children, have positive aspects on children’s behaviour such as preventing them from playing their favorite game or watching TV shows because of their negative way of acting may help them to regard their actions more precisely. By this way, children will pay more attention to their environment, society, friends and family, so they may consider their choices more wisely. In conclusion, I agree with having an effective conversation at the first place by bringing reasons and facts to show them why their manners were wrong to develop their education in a good way. After all, if they repeat their mistakes, it is better to reckon with light punishments as I’ve mentioned.

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