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Topic: many people complain about commercial advertisements and their influence on children . should they be controlled by the government ? what are the possible effects on children? Now a daysnowadays, parents are much too sensitive to their children’s education, so they believe that children are deeply affected by commercial advertisements which will lead them to negative workmisbehave . Paying particular attention to commercial advertisements that impressively influence on every child is an important component of educational principlesals. Parents complain about commercial advertisements because it they absolutely distract their attention from their true path of life. Although advertisements havehas some positive points, people don’t know them appropriate for children. Parents think that children (deem that) Children Should see more informative programs such as educational videos, intelligence games and music playing than commercial advertisements. From their point of their view, children who are involved in positive and useful work are more successful than they those who are not. On the other hand, the government plays a remarkable role as do people. Governments must widely monitor advertising and control destructive advertisements if they legalize it,. By which I mean with by regulating correct policiesy, the government can reduce wrecking advertisement. Governments can control and monitor commercial advertisements as much as economyics, policiestics, financial and foreign affairs. In my opinion, governments profit from beneficiaries of commercial advertisement as one of the most lucrative markets and which helps them to continue their work. Moreover, the government is reluctant to control financial Issues because not only does it not prevent beneficiaries but also protects them . that governments partly eliminate unpleasant commercial advertisements from people’s life is substantially reduces concerns about/over children .

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