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It's very important that children should study hard at school. Time spent playing sports is time wasted. Do you agree? School is a place which where students atin different ages have spent a huge portion of their life in it and has influenced a massive part of their time. Schools have different aims but unfortunately most people focus merely on the educational aspect. part merely. according to our experiences, schools are not only a place for education but also a place for communications and other skills which are required during our life time. A research done recently on educational systems has shown that although spending too much many hours studying hard/tough/harsh although is applied in most of countries, this approach isn't efficient and doesn't have proper feedbacks. This study says suggests that it's very absolutely essential to spend your time at school on various courses and some free time spending with your counterparts/peers in different aspects like sport or art or even some activities like home chores on school premises which are obligatory obliged in Japan. In other words, however, although we may think schools are a place just for developing our educational enhancement/progresss different aspects/sides of a person such as behavior, attitude and even the way of speaking. In fact it leads to changes, either good or bad but eventually it depends on everybody to choose their his or her side. Besides, a majority of people, especially parents, believe the time of playing different sports at school is a kind of wasting students' time which can be used for extra curricula/extracurricular activities. Sometimes they don't even accept neither sport activities nor art ones while one considerable approach by these two is promoting students' social behavior and conformity that may not get improved any other time or place. To conclude, the whole understanding and idea which I have got is that In in schools we need some time for activities like sport and art as much as curricula and the old-fashioned attitudes about this multi-objective/multi-purpose place and educational programs must be refreshed to help the next generations.

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