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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others than believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age? Nowadays, many children are allowed by their parents to grow up at home until they reach the eligible age – six or seven years old – for sending them to primary school as opposed to others who believe that they are able to attending school younger than the suitable age. While there are many benefits of staying home until six or seven years old, I firmly believe that they can benefit from having school experience sooner than other kids. First of all, children will learn how to engage with their peers and different people at such an early age. For example, they play with other kids in their class under the teacher’s supervision, so their interaction skills can be improved. Moreover, if they stay at home and to be in touch with their family, they will have less confidence in communicating with strangers or dealing with a new situation. Therefore, school experience in at younger ages can develop kids’ their social behaviors. Secondly, one of the matters going to school sooner than others can solve it is that parents in modern life do not have enough time for takingto take care of childrentheir young charges. For this reason, sending children to school have two-fold benefits for parents. To illustratefor one, the kids are kept, and also they are trained by children experts. Besides, not only do they prepare for primary school, but also their fear of school is contained/gone. Hence, parents will have ease of mind about children by sending them to school. So overall, I postulated/maintain that even though children are able to learn many things by from parents, attending school when they are younger can educate them socially and so they learn useful manners.

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