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Numerous/ Plenty of people spend their leisure times in traveling to exotic places. People appropriate a huge budget to their journeys. A question which is the matter of concern is whether internal journeys are have more profitable than external journeys? I am, to a great extent of the opinion that internal trips have more advantagesous over external trips. To begin with, traveling in our own country helps to the country's economy. Broadly speaking when you go from your state to another state you will spend your money in your country and thiswhich will help to the economy of that states. In internal traveling you consume inner/domestic productsproductions and services and go to inner hotels and pay their rents. To be more specific on in each business or vacation trip workable journey or fun journey you appropriate money for the hotel and many other expenses things that you need; these help money to circulate/turn in an economic cycle and it leadleading to a thriving tourist industry. When this section succeeds, success it could help to other industries to overcome their problems. As an illustration, an the economic magazine mentioned (?) that the tourist industry has 0.2 percent of the economic rising rate in the developed countries and if a country can encourage its his (?) people to internal traveling it could raise rise this factor. External trips are expensive and on in these trips you have stress. Of equal importance is the fact that some problems such as security are very important in a foreign country. Strangers have been easily attacked by culprits. Simply stated, in a new place that you do not know it you will be vulnerable. Health problems are very dangerous for you because you do not have not any friend to help you and you have a limited budget. However, what I stated cannot be over generalized to all contexts,. in a new country you can learn a new language, see different cultures and a lot of new places. To put it in a nutshell, it is better to travel in our country because not only does it help our economy, but also an external journey has many problems and it is usually expensive.

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