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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? In recent decades due to the mass media and global village we are familiar with various kinds of music. The same as other types of art, music was a part of the human history. Recently some kinds of it have become became more popular which is are known as international music. Some individuals believe that we should give more value to local or folkloric music. In my opinion, valued valuing traditional music could be a way of protecting a part of a culture that is important. In my view, music is all around us that is coming from nature. The sound of rivers, wind, birds and even an elephant is a piece of music. It has been with us since for ever. It is with us when we are happy or sad. We listen to music in every single event of our life. In birth and death, in a wedding or graduation, or in the New Year’s Eeve. Even if there is no instrument or electric device people will start singing and clapping. Music has such a vital role in our life that is impossible to imagine humans’ life without musicit. We communicate via this art form/music without knowing a common language. We use music it to send profound messages to each other. It seems to me, music is food for our soul. By listening to different kinds of music we try different cuisines. Also, music is one of the main elements of any culture. We learn about a nation and community through their folklore music. People express and share their thoughts, believes beliefs and emotions via music. Thus, it is crucial to introduce traditional music to the young generation in order to teach them about their roots, culture, and social values. There is a concern that every dayattracting more and more adolescents into international music can lead to abolishing traditional music, and thereby eliminating a part of a unique culture. As a result, international music has many advantages for instance, it unites people throughout the world with different cultures, languages, and religions and makes them closer. On the other hand, it can damage local cultures as well. To address this issue, international festivals for traditional bands and music videos which with different nations cooperating could be constructive. With + noun + verb-ing Task 1 The charts show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. The figures illustrate data came out of a survey of adult education. The bar chart indicates elements which motivate adults decide to study. Also, the pie chart indicates individuals’ idea about the way of sharing the costs of adult education. Overall, the bar chart shows that interest in subject is the main reason people decide to study by 40 percent. In addition to this, to gain qualifications is the second main reason with merely a slight difference by 38 percent. Also, the last reason adults decide to study is to meet people with only 9 percent. To improve prospects of promotion and enjoy learning and studying both with 20 percent are the other factors that motivate people to study. Moreover, helpful for current job by 22 percent is another reason that adult decide to study.In addition to all, the pie chart shows that people think that the costs of adult education must be paid 35 percent by employer, 25 percent by taxpayer, and only 40 percent by individuals.

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