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darya atighi 11:45 AM (42 minutes ago) to me Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowadays most of the parents are too much involved with their works and need some help to takeing care of their children. Some people think childcare centres and grandparents can help parents to take care of their children. I would like to discuss both views and give my own opinion about this subject. I believe that parents should streak strike a balance between their work and the time that they should spent spend with their children. On the other hand, some of them have lots of responsibility in work and they cannot reduce their work hours. The best idea for those parents is to entrust their children to their grandparents because grandparents are part of the family and they are more common with their grandchildren’s desire and are more compassionate about them and they can spend more time with them. But in childcare centres there are more children exist and the teacher should have eyes on the other ones too. However, some of the children does not have any grandparents because they are dead our or they are too old to care for their grandchild. I in this circumstance the only choice they have is entrust their children to childcare centres. It is not a bad idea because sometimes these places develop child creativity in different things aspects/areas/subjects . But also it has drawbacks too because maybe other children bullyied to our child and our child gets depressed if this happened to them in at a low age. In conclusion, i think parents should consider some time to spend with children by ourselves to give them our their love but for the second choice we can get help from grandparents and childcare centres.

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