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The statement proposes that if the administration of high schools omits the music and art from their curriculum, there will be more spaces for English and mathematics classes. The chief aim of this decision is paying more attention to the interest and needs of a student who wants wishes to attend college. However, this idea has downside which will be delineated in the following paragraphs. To begin with, elimination of this these classes from high schools will preclude amorphous souls of a generation to taste some fantastic experiences. They only were educated by science and worked by numbers. The inevitable outcomes of this education is an apathy dull future. Musics and the arts are the source of emotions of human beings. We need people to have gossamer/sensitive souls which help them to think more meticulously. A good illustration of what I pointed out, is my own country where people show reverence only toward engineers and doctors.That behavior leads to a situation which where a major portion of our society study mathematics and science because of not being able to choose any other fields. Owing to my experience, we are facing with a majority of people who do are not have fund fond of what they have learned in colleges and universities. The society are is full of civilians who are occupied in boring jobs since they do not have any other possible options to choose. Another compelling argument forward this is that anyone has a unique talent. There is a responsibility of each governments to bring uphelp any individuals grow due to what is commensurate to their talents. Elimination of art and music forces the students who have a pure soul, to choose like the rest of ordinary ones. In that case, there will be a chance to get bully bullied due to not have having the strength of competing in the new harsh environments. It will ruin the life of them. Considering that, the society deprives itself from of venerateveneration. Considering the points which are discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that music and arts are the souls of mankind. they must not be eliminated. Each high school should provide a the right situation for any talented students to decide on their own for their future’s college life, not only just based on some statistics and large portions of ordinary choices.

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