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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Recently, people have been living longer than before. For this reason, some people believe that the retirement age should be increased. Not only am do I not agree with this issue, but also I opine the disadvantages outweigh the advantages for both companies and employees. In recent years, due to wide-ranging health care that has been provided for most of the people we have a lead to longer lifespan. On the other hand, people would be aware of the importance of exercises. Besides, there are much more activities that help people to live for years. Meanwhile, people prefer to live for an old age both to see their children's maturity/growing up and enjoying their life besides their relatives. Although longevity consider/hasve the merits for individuals, it does not mean that they could work for long hours in the workplace. From my point of view, despite the long life against long-lived that some people may have, they can work in a proper way until a the specific age. To put it simply, they might have not enough efficiency after (some) years. People tend to have more rest after thirty years of laboring. Moreover, they prefer to spend long hours on their families. The more relations with their friends or relatives, the more beneficial both emotionally and mentally. In my opinion, working for long hours after retiring, people who need money can do so which earn by doing their job. In a nutshell, that is harmfully aged people's working is harmful is indisputable, but in some cases, people because of the fact that they need it money wise would like to work. I opine, it is incumbent on governments to that provide facilities so that which people do not need require to work in their old age.

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