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Some people think that parents should not give their children expensive presents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples based on you own experience. Nowadays it has been common amongst rich families to give their children excessively expensive gifts. This is extremely blamed criticized by many people and educational consultants while some still persist on this. Not all people who are of the idea that expensive presents prove their love, passion and care are wealthy; it is widely seen between upstarts. When it comes to this notion I hold the idea that giving children valuable presents is much important than expensive gifts. First of all, I think parents should be aware of the consequences of providing their children with everything they need. Giving children everything they need not only do ruins his their future but it also prevents him them from of improving their self-confidence. It can induce him them the idea that he is a special creature person and it is on others to provide him them his needs. Expecting from others, those children think others must treat them just like their parents that itwhich can leads to severely dangerous mental disorders such as Narcissistic personality disorder. On the other hand, people who hold the idea of giving expensive presents think it is a way of expressing their truly deep love to their children. They believe that this is a good way to show their children they are especial to them and they sacrifice everything they have for them. In conclusion, I think parents should strike a balance between the price and value of the present they give to their children. I think a valuable book or an extra educational class could be a more profitable present than an expensive one. I believe the most precious gift for the ones we love is our time and attention.

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