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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from you own knowledge or experience. (All of us spend a great deal of time on computers every day and children are no exception.) In the modern era area, with technological developments by developing technology, using computers in every fields is unavoidable. These days, people spend a lot of time on their own computers or laptops. Most children like to play games on computers and they like to spend most of their time on them computers too. I certainly disagree with the entire people using computers every day by entire people especially children because it has mush negative point more than positive point. It is very important that children have enough physical activities. They should play and learn and have enough sleep. Children using computers every day, have less activities than others and typically will not engage in other pastimes. They don’t like to do other activities. For example, they don’t like to sleep or reading books. Based on several reports, some of them spend a lot of time on computer games which and it causes many health problems. In addition, children should learn to communicate with others and find friends. Computers make them alone and they never get any experiences in social behaviors. Also, they cannot focus on their educations. Their They parents always complain about from their children because . Because, children don’t care about their parents and nothing is as very important as well as computers for them. All in all, using computers is inevitable. It’s very important that parents spend time with children. They can go shopping, play football, cooking and do several activities with themtheir children or . Moreover, they should encourage them to do/engage in sports or art activities. Finally, they should manage children’s free time by setting programs and time limitations on to using computers.

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