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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Obviously the role of both mothers and fathers in bringing up their offspring is considerable, hence we cannot choose neither men nor women as a more effective person in taking care of their charges. Some people believe that mothers have a more influential role in their life,. however, some others insist on being impresseding enormously by their fathers’ attitude. Most people, myself included, claim that there is not any proven evidence belief regarding the correlation between the sex of humankind and the effects of them on their charges’ behavior. It is better to focus on parents' sense of responsibility and the atmosphere where that their children they were nurtured up there. There is an undeniable fact that women spend more time with children than men because of their job conditions. For instance, men are considered as a breadwinner and do some extra jobs to make a better living. That is why not only do have mothers have a closer relationship with their babies, but also children can share their sensitive issues with them easier. On the other hand, fathers are expected to be stronger and more reliable members of each family and back their wife and children up all the time such as especially in challenging situations. In a nutshell, I, personally, think that spouses should be like two intimate friends and guide the fruits of their life in a rather tranquilizing place. In addition, help each other to do/fulfil this huge duty. The more peaceful the environment, the more successful babies. What is more, by drawing a comparison between the effects of family members, that is fathers and mothers, on charges such as fathers and mothers, it is revealeds that the role of both of them are is undeniable.

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