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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work, some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for experience and responsibility. What are your opinions on this? Children’s work for income is a complex issue, and it is difficult to say that this type of work is fair or injustice so that some believe working of children is not acceptable and some others say that it can be a part of individuals’ experiment experience and which causes them to be more responsible. In from my point of view, children can work in a part time or time‐free job, but in specific and special conditions which is are controlled by parents or family. Immature people’s working for income has its own difficulties and drawbacks and maybe they be exploited by job owners for a little money and in a harmful situation which harm damages their body and soul. Because of low amount of experience and physical power, these children mostly are employed in boring and repetitive jobs, for instance, in some cases they are used in dumping yards to collect and recycle materials, and what they can learn and experience in these jobs to assess them in the future. In some developed countries such as Japan, parents learn teach their children to contribute to household chores or their teachers ask them to clean classes and or toilets to learn teach them a sense of contribution and hard work hard working to use in the future and to decrease the amount of school’s costs, and then students will pay less than before. Working in families’ workshops or farm at leisure times can be another useful activity for children to improve their abilities and apply them. Although working under parents’s control has its own advantages, but children should have a sufficient amount of free time to play games and rest and enjoy their childhood and with these games they can improve their basic mental abilities such as imagination. Consequently, children’s work is a very complicated issue which has many factors and should be applied in a proper time and place under legal/tight/strict scientific inspections to avoid its drawbacks. Word count = 318

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