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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is needless to say that to err is human beings are impeccable, so every individual might commits a crime or only do a misdemeanor. Apparently, these perpetrators should be punished due to preventing them from reoffending doing again so they will be an object lesson and (making an example of them) for others. While some say criminals and wrongdoers should be punished on a certain and fixed basis for each type of crime, others believe that the motive/motivation of crime must be regarded as one of the most important parts of judgment. Firstly, since many countries have a constitution which for each crime, a fixed punishment has been defined, so all people in front of/before these canons are equal. For instance, there is no difference between those persons who commit a crime whether their motivations are the same or not. Also, nobody can judge others out of these principles and based on their own preferences. Secondly, some people believe that we should regard individuals' motivation and situation. Simply, maybe a person commits burglary due to poverty. Analogously, another person commits burglary due to defrauding individuals or organizations, so the first group does it because if they did not, they would die of on hunger but the second group just commits crime only because of earning money in an easy way. Therefore, by taking into accounts their motivations and situations, the first group is not a culprit. To sum up, from the author's perspective, regarding motivations in judgments gives us a facility to classify crimes precisely. However, maybe finding individuals' motivation is inapplicable. Additionally, perhaps in some cases criminals would use of this canon for prevarication and elusion.

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Oil Discovery, Aida Pourimani https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/563-oil-discovery-aida-pourimani https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/563-oil-discovery-aida-pourimani

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Num87 Many things have has been discovered in the world that have it changed of people's life style in my country totally such as the discovery of druge , the internet. or… but one of them that it was very impressive was oil discovery. Firstly, it had a huge was effect on the economy in my country,. Secondly, it led to raising / improveing the level of education. Finally, it helped develop cause to relationship with the international community. In the past several decades, there wasn't no denying the impact of Iran oil economy. It cause strengthened the financial foundation, so the government expenditure of oil income on treatment , food or other needs of people for example in my country , the cost of treatment are free or free insurance or people got food allowance or farmer got financial aid in agriculture .oil has a are positive effect on the foundation fundamental of my country , imagininge life without oil revenues is are terrible in my country I think it was directly on education it causes the government to send sent people for studying to abroad such as England, and France. The government decided to established university and school all‐around of my country. Teachers and professors came to Iran for teaching in university in school student were learning English and France , tuition was free , all costs were funded from oil revenues while students got get free food ,uniform , health care from government . on the other hand, they have scientific exchange by oil with other countryies in the area of technology It helped to get improve relation with the world by oil revenues for example my country was known with this industry to the world while it is powerful and famous manufacturer all around the world. And annual conferences were was held about oil in my country which this cause to helped to the tourism industry.

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Outerspace, Golnaz Favaedi https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/564-outerspace-golnaz-favaedi https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/564-outerspace-golnaz-favaedi

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95. Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space ( for example traveling to the moon and other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on earth. The governments should find and survey the problems and requirements of people, then they should present/propose/provide/offer make a solution for them and they sort them by priority,So one of the most important duties of governments is to decide where they should spend much money.they can make a decision as to that how much money should be allocated for which one. I strongly agree that with the governments should spend as much money as possible for basic needs., first, extending extent the level of education and scientific research, . second, improving healthcare, and third they should control the contamination of our environment. First of all, governments should consider to the growth of education in the country. They should recruit many expert teachers at schools and universities. They should establish specialized universities for specific science. Moreover, the poor people need the government's fund to continue their studies. Not having enough money should not deny students opportunities to get higher education. The governments should make sure everyone can get equal education by funding education systems. All of them are dependent on government's support. Secondly, governments should develop our health. As we see everyday, there are a lot of new diseases and many people died because of infections, cancer, and other sicknesses which the governments should pay attention to them.They should develop most of the medicines to eradicate diseases in current days. In fact, the governments should spend much money to improve hospital's equipment and they build modern hospitals. Also they should allocate money to remedial services for poor people which is to assure ensure them for any diseases. In fact, governments should think about kids's future and take care of our health. Finally, Nowadays, the industrial activities in many countries emit high an intense amount of carbon dioxide, which causes greenhouse effect that leads to changinge the climate. These impact on every living creature in the world, so . So, governments must take care of this issue by declare regulatinge to control emission of carbon dioxide. Also, our environment has been seriously polluted. They should control emission of carbon dioxide, governments should invest in alternative energy like using solar energy instead of coal energy. If we live in good environment, our life would be better. Furthermore, Day and night, we drink contaminated water, we breathe polluted air with full of dust and dirty smoke. Companies continuously emit pollutants into the rivers and surely this real situation will be non – stop because of profits. The only solution is that governments' investment in environmental technology instead of exploring the outer spaces will guarantee the rights of producers and the sustainability of our environment.

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Poverty-Reasons and Solutions, Marzieh Javadi https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/565-poverty-reasons-and-solutions-marzieh-javadi https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/565-poverty-reasons-and-solutions-marzieh-javadi

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? Penury is one of the main/biggest issues that the entire world has to deal with. All countries have been tried trying various ways of facing on the poverty/impoverishment poor. in this essay some of indicators such as unemployment and lack of education will be discussed, followed by recommendations to address the issues at hand. Admittedly, unemployment has a great impact on creating poverty. Since living expenses needs earning money, it will be destructive when a person who is the bread winner could not fulfill it. Therefore, a person and his/her family will encounter many money problems and it is increasing day by day. As a consequence, they have no income as well as no money, even for their basic needs and it raises poverty. This condition not only makes exerts/has a lot of pressures on family, but also brings negative effects on the whole society. Another reason which convinces me to support it is lack of education or good skill. It would limit people's ability to access decent jobs to develop themselves and participate fully in society. In addition, it would lead to make few options for them to pick/choose a job with low salary for them which also results in (leads to) not having enough money. The former farmer problem can be effectively solved by increasing job opportunities with reasonable salaries. The latter problem would be resolved by experts, they can do some volunteering works like having have classes for those people who are illiterate. In this regard, not only have they helped to their society to combat against poverty, but also have reduced improved the rate of literacy in their country. To put it in a nutshell, it is our duty to eradicate poverty poor with long –term planning and short‐term and make delighted life for the next generation. ``

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Stress-Reasons, Solutions, Majid Talebzadeh https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/566-stress-reasons-solutions-majid-talebzadeh https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/124-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-17/566-stress-reasons-solutions-majid-talebzadeh

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In recent years, life has become more stressful than it has ever been. As a consequence, more and more people are suffering from stress‐related problems. What factors are contributing to this increase and what do you think can be done to overcome the current problems? These days, people have become more and more stressed out ful than before as a result of ungovernable population growth and lives' unpleasant problems that cause makes us mental and physical suffering. We live in an era of rapidly changing of technology. In most societies especially in developed countries one of the biggest challenges is avoiding or overcoming to stress and decreasinge it. In the other words, our world becomes more complex and its is necessary need to work and study harder. In this case, repetition of the same jobs everyday makes us bored. our boring. In comparisone with of before, nowadays we are using have use modern mother facilities and been up to date which on the on the other hands its causes commercial problems. Another cause should be population growth and traffic. Every day we spend a lot of time in on the back of traffic jams. It means that we spend less time with family and resting. Similarly, air pollution from traffic fumes, can be one of the most important reasons motive for stress increasing, so what can we do? Is there any convenient way for running way from this riddle? For solution, the first step is becomeing up to date by studying and learnsing modern technologies and developsing our skills. For example sometimes I see elders who which are really confused about using cell phones or other gadgets. Furthermore, last but not least less, exercising and doing some hobbies probably help us to lessen stress. In conclusion, For instance, based on a survey, there is no certain solution. Scientists believe that not only can stress not be detrimental, but it is is it also been useful if we can control it.

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