Thursdays GMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم تلفن: 42-88679341 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/120-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-03 2024-05-03T21:47:00+00:00 IELTSTOEFLCENTER info@ieltstoeflcenter.com Joomla! - Open Source Content Management Caring for Grandchildren by Grandparents, Amir Gilani 2015-12-24T07:10:09+00:00 2015-12-24T07:10:09+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/120-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-03/529-caring-for-grandchildren-by-grandparents-amir-gilani <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/Caring for Grandchildren by Grandparents, Amir Moh Gilani.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Nowadays in many families the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children. Is it a good or bad development for grandparents? Give your own opinion and examples. In recent years in some families grandparents are taking care of their grandchildren. This is due to the hectic pace of life which has led to the time limitation most of the parents have. Many are There are a lot of people of the opinion that it is the responsibility of a mother to bring up her child/children while it is disagreed recommended by some others that parents can ask for help or take the whole responsibility to a grandparents. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this issue. with the reasons authors idea will be shared. I personally believe that this is not a good task for grandparents to take care of their grandchildren because in most cases they are suffering from different kinds of weaknesses and illnesses and it is not really fair to expect them to raise our children. In addition to this, as in most cases grandparents are over 60 years old, they cannot handle their daily chores by themselves and such duties not only do not make their condition better, but it aggravates it (make their situation worse.) While the responsibility of bringing up the children is handed over to their grandparents, mothers can return to their career after a few days she gave birth to her baby and this is an advantage from a professional point of view. According to UNHC more than 65% of mothers in U.S have has lost their job after they gave birth to their babies. If mothers do not have the stress of losing their job, they do not feel any fear of pregnancy and this itself can boost the birth rate, the exact thing we need in developed countries. But the other side of the coin is that the children who are brought up by someone except their real mothers will face a lot of emotional problems and mental disorders. Psychologists believe that that it is of paramount importance that mothers take care of their children by themselves to avoid such issues. It is highly recommended that children should be hugged and hear their mother heart up to the age 5 or most probably they will face the problems mentioned earlier. In conclusion, I can say that I am strongly against the idea of giving the responsibility of raising grandchildren by grandparents. There are a lot of researches and statistics that those who are brought up by anyone but not their parents would encounter with a lot of disorder and failure in their adulthood</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/Caring for Grandchildren by Grandparents, Amir Moh Gilani.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Nowadays in many families the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children. Is it a good or bad development for grandparents? Give your own opinion and examples. In recent years in some families grandparents are taking care of their grandchildren. This is due to the hectic pace of life which has led to the time limitation most of the parents have. Many are There are a lot of people of the opinion that it is the responsibility of a mother to bring up her child/children while it is disagreed recommended by some others that parents can ask for help or take the whole responsibility to a grandparents. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this issue. with the reasons authors idea will be shared. I personally believe that this is not a good task for grandparents to take care of their grandchildren because in most cases they are suffering from different kinds of weaknesses and illnesses and it is not really fair to expect them to raise our children. In addition to this, as in most cases grandparents are over 60 years old, they cannot handle their daily chores by themselves and such duties not only do not make their condition better, but it aggravates it (make their situation worse.) While the responsibility of bringing up the children is handed over to their grandparents, mothers can return to their career after a few days she gave birth to her baby and this is an advantage from a professional point of view. According to UNHC more than 65% of mothers in U.S have has lost their job after they gave birth to their babies. If mothers do not have the stress of losing their job, they do not feel any fear of pregnancy and this itself can boost the birth rate, the exact thing we need in developed countries. But the other side of the coin is that the children who are brought up by someone except their real mothers will face a lot of emotional problems and mental disorders. Psychologists believe that that it is of paramount importance that mothers take care of their children by themselves to avoid such issues. It is highly recommended that children should be hugged and hear their mother heart up to the age 5 or most probably they will face the problems mentioned earlier. In conclusion, I can say that I am strongly against the idea of giving the responsibility of raising grandchildren by grandparents. There are a lot of researches and statistics that those who are brought up by anyone but not their parents would encounter with a lot of disorder and failure in their adulthood</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> People in Cities are Becoming Richer, Marzieh Javadipour 2015-12-24T07:10:28+00:00 2015-12-24T07:10:28+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/120-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-03/530-people-in-cities-are-becoming-richer-marzieh-javadipour <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/People in Cities are Becoming Richer, Marzieh Javadipour.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">As people in cities are becoming richer, more of them can afford to buy cars. In consequence, city centers are becoming more congested and polluted all over the world, what are the main causes of this problem and what are solutions? Since people in towns have become wealthier, most of them could pay for buying cars. As a result, city centers have become more crowded and contaminated., there are various reasons and solutions behind this issue., this essay will explain the causes and offer some solutions. One of the most important reasons would be our modern life style, in this modern era area, family members are working and they need their own car for traveling to work. Most of the time public transportation is are not available, especially in times when which people need to go to work and buses or the subway is are so crowded., to put it simply, public transportations is are not convenient, as a matter of fact family members prefer to be independent with this idea if they had their own car, they would will be go anywhere in anytime that they wanted,. Therefore, it would be easyily to access for them. There are several measures which could be taken to identify the severity of problem, so more attention should focus on developing public transportation,. to be more specific, we can improve these kinds of transportations such as trains, buses and taxies transportations with more convenient accessibility, reasonable prices and no fewer time limitations in comparison with private cars. Another significant solution could be making commercial breaks which show people the pros and cons of using those two different transportations,. Simply put, what I am trying to say is creating grating a new culture by using the media help. To put it in nutshell, from my perspective, cheap and convenient public transport must be the answer to the ever‐increasing problem of traffic congestion.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/People in Cities are Becoming Richer, Marzieh Javadipour.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">As people in cities are becoming richer, more of them can afford to buy cars. In consequence, city centers are becoming more congested and polluted all over the world, what are the main causes of this problem and what are solutions? Since people in towns have become wealthier, most of them could pay for buying cars. As a result, city centers have become more crowded and contaminated., there are various reasons and solutions behind this issue., this essay will explain the causes and offer some solutions. One of the most important reasons would be our modern life style, in this modern era area, family members are working and they need their own car for traveling to work. Most of the time public transportation is are not available, especially in times when which people need to go to work and buses or the subway is are so crowded., to put it simply, public transportations is are not convenient, as a matter of fact family members prefer to be independent with this idea if they had their own car, they would will be go anywhere in anytime that they wanted,. Therefore, it would be easyily to access for them. There are several measures which could be taken to identify the severity of problem, so more attention should focus on developing public transportation,. to be more specific, we can improve these kinds of transportations such as trains, buses and taxies transportations with more convenient accessibility, reasonable prices and no fewer time limitations in comparison with private cars. Another significant solution could be making commercial breaks which show people the pros and cons of using those two different transportations,. Simply put, what I am trying to say is creating grating a new culture by using the media help. To put it in nutshell, from my perspective, cheap and convenient public transport must be the answer to the ever‐increasing problem of traffic congestion.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Replacing Fossil fuels, Vahid Rafiee 2015-12-24T07:11:05+00:00 2015-12-24T07:11:05+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/120-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-03/531-replacing-fossil-fuels-vahid-rafiee <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/Replacing Fossil fuels, Vahid Rafiee.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. Nowadays, utilization of alternative energy sources has been disseminated among individuals, experts and decision makers. While some claim that replacing fossil fuels by other alternatives is exorbitant and inapplicable, others are opposed objective and point out a bleak future for our endangered environment and dwindled fossil fuel sources. Firstly, by exploiting of inexhaustible resources such as the sun, wind and waves, not only can it guarantee our future as a result of being eternal, but also it can preserve our environment by fuming less carbon dioxide other detrimental gases into the atmosphere. Nonetheless, according to statistics, fossil fuels are being depleted and they will be exhausted in a not‐too‐far a future, about to the following 100 years. Moreover, if we push ahead with fossil fuels consumption, many kinds of animals will be extinct extinguished due to water contamination, air pollution and climate change. Secondly, this approach needs a lot of infrastructures that must be erected before execution. Moreover, too many researchers have to put their efforts and attempts to find an economical way to make expenses decrease significantly. Furthermore, even if we have an intention of using these alternative resources, somehow it is inapplicable or takes more than some decades to bring about because there are a lot of devices and machines that work only with oil, so all of them such as the engine of all cars must be rectified or replaced due to consuming another fuel. To sum up, from the author's perspective, the countries, which have an ample budget to contribute to researches and investigations in order to find an optimum way for the execution of this approach, must take immediate steps in this regard go for it first. Also, replacing fossil fuels by other sources is are indispensable and sooner or later we have to do so.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/Replacing Fossil fuels, Vahid Rafiee.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. Nowadays, utilization of alternative energy sources has been disseminated among individuals, experts and decision makers. While some claim that replacing fossil fuels by other alternatives is exorbitant and inapplicable, others are opposed objective and point out a bleak future for our endangered environment and dwindled fossil fuel sources. Firstly, by exploiting of inexhaustible resources such as the sun, wind and waves, not only can it guarantee our future as a result of being eternal, but also it can preserve our environment by fuming less carbon dioxide other detrimental gases into the atmosphere. Nonetheless, according to statistics, fossil fuels are being depleted and they will be exhausted in a not‐too‐far a future, about to the following 100 years. Moreover, if we push ahead with fossil fuels consumption, many kinds of animals will be extinct extinguished due to water contamination, air pollution and climate change. Secondly, this approach needs a lot of infrastructures that must be erected before execution. Moreover, too many researchers have to put their efforts and attempts to find an economical way to make expenses decrease significantly. Furthermore, even if we have an intention of using these alternative resources, somehow it is inapplicable or takes more than some decades to bring about because there are a lot of devices and machines that work only with oil, so all of them such as the engine of all cars must be rectified or replaced due to consuming another fuel. To sum up, from the author's perspective, the countries, which have an ample budget to contribute to researches and investigations in order to find an optimum way for the execution of this approach, must take immediate steps in this regard go for it first. Also, replacing fossil fuels by other sources is are indispensable and sooner or later we have to do so.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Statue of a Famous Person, Golnaz Favaedi 2015-12-24T07:12:10+00:00 2015-12-24T07:12:10+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-10-33/120-writing-workshop-thursday-1394/writing-workshop-thursday-94-10-03/532-statue-of-a-famous-person-golnaz-favaedi <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/Statue of a Famous Person, Golnaz Favaedi.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? It is an obligation for every countryies to build a statue or monument of a famous person to honor him and show the country 's respect to him. I would like to build a statue status of a person who inspires pride is proud person and has helped the to progress of my country to show respect for from his activities and he is Dr.Samii because he is the father of neurosurgery neurosurgeon of Iran and he is a founder and has done do many charity activities and finally he is the professor of many universities. First of all he is a distinguished Iranian neurosurgeon and medical scientist. He got his Doctor of Medicine (M.D.) degree in neurosurgery at the age of 33. He was young and so far at that time until now he has received many awards that make him famous. For example 1.Honorary President of The World Federation of Neurosurgical Societies.2. World Physician 3. Iranian Science and Culture Hall of Fame and he got many awards during his life so he is proud person for my country. Second he is founder of International Neuroscience Institute (INI), based in Hanover, and he has been the president of the International Society for Neurosurgery and was elected as the founding president of the Congress of International Neurosurgeons. also he is founder the biggest hospital in Iran that is located in Rasht. Moreover, he has built build many clinics for charity. He treats and performs surgery on many diseases without any cost from the poor people so he is worthy to build his status. Finally A major aspect of Professor Samii's scientific career was his devotion to education and enhancement of neurosurgery. From the beginning of his career as the professor of neurosurgery, he put a major emphasis on education of neurosurgeons from all over the world. He held regular annual or biannual courses in microneurosurgery in the University of Mainz. Also Professor Samii established the world's first educational course in skull base surgery in Hannover. he trains many students in Neuroscience so building his status shows to the next generation that he is a big man</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Thursdays/1394/Writing Workshop Thursday 94.10.03/Statue of a Famous Person, Golnaz Favaedi.pdf"><img src="http://s6.picofile.com/file/8211445518/pdf_button24.png" alt="" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? It is an obligation for every countryies to build a statue or monument of a famous person to honor him and show the country 's respect to him. I would like to build a statue status of a person who inspires pride is proud person and has helped the to progress of my country to show respect for from his activities and he is Dr.Samii because he is the father of neurosurgery neurosurgeon of Iran and he is a founder and has done do many charity activities and finally he is the professor of many universities. First of all he is a distinguished Iranian neurosurgeon and medical scientist. He got his Doctor of Medicine (M.D.) degree in neurosurgery at the age of 33. He was young and so far at that time until now he has received many awards that make him famous. For example 1.Honorary President of The World Federation of Neurosurgical Societies.2. World Physician 3. Iranian Science and Culture Hall of Fame and he got many awards during his life so he is proud person for my country. Second he is founder of International Neuroscience Institute (INI), based in Hanover, and he has been the president of the International Society for Neurosurgery and was elected as the founding president of the Congress of International Neurosurgeons. also he is founder the biggest hospital in Iran that is located in Rasht. Moreover, he has built build many clinics for charity. He treats and performs surgery on many diseases without any cost from the poor people so he is worthy to build his status. Finally A major aspect of Professor Samii's scientific career was his devotion to education and enhancement of neurosurgery. From the beginning of his career as the professor of neurosurgery, he put a major emphasis on education of neurosurgeons from all over the world. He held regular annual or biannual courses in microneurosurgery in the University of Mainz. Also Professor Samii established the world's first educational course in skull base surgery in Hannover. he trains many students in Neuroscience so building his status shows to the next generation that he is a big man</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table>