Fridays GMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم تلفن: 42-88679341 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/458-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-10-06 2024-05-08T15:51:40+00:00 IELTSTOEFLCENTER info@ieltstoeflcenter.com Joomla! - Open Source Content Management Amir G, Travels 2019-12-30T17:34:15+00:00 2019-12-30T17:34:15+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/458-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-10-06/3302-amir-g-travels Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Amir G, Travels.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries? In this day and age, people are traveling much more than before, and this has led to many achievements besides a few disadvantages. Familiarizing with other cultures, travelers can bridge a seemingly unbridgeable gap between different people across the globe. While many argue this can widen the cultural differences, an overwhelming majority of people believe that the more international travels, the more mutual understanding amongst people across the globe. During the last couple of decades owing to the economic growth in many parts of the world, and thanks to the Internet and its practical solutions for economical travels, people from different social strata are traveling around the globe. This can provide for both guests and hosts with a chance to get a hands-on experience to understand other values, and learn how to respect people with a different culture. Only when individuals socialize in the real world can we expect a breakthrough in mutual respect and understanding. However, Sometimes these travels can increase tension between nations if cultural backgrounds have not been considered in advance. A typical example of this happened when a group of western tourists hit an angry bull in New Delhi. While this was interpreted as an unforgiven insult to local people, the tour leader guide described it simply as self-defense against the attacking bull. Another example happened in Islamabad when a British visitor walked inside a masque while she had her shoes on. A majority of local people consider such misunderstanding a severely obvious violation to of their values which can lead to racial hatred. To cut a long story short, though with the growth of travels a few more disputes between people have been observed, the advantage gained by this growth is an indisputable fact. The advocates of this otherwise perfect growing habit amongst people opine that not only can this growth lead to world peace, but it also is beneficial to lower local unrest in countries by teaching people to respect other believes beliefs and rights.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Amir G, Travels.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries? In this day and age, people are traveling much more than before, and this has led to many achievements besides a few disadvantages. Familiarizing with other cultures, travelers can bridge a seemingly unbridgeable gap between different people across the globe. While many argue this can widen the cultural differences, an overwhelming majority of people believe that the more international travels, the more mutual understanding amongst people across the globe. During the last couple of decades owing to the economic growth in many parts of the world, and thanks to the Internet and its practical solutions for economical travels, people from different social strata are traveling around the globe. This can provide for both guests and hosts with a chance to get a hands-on experience to understand other values, and learn how to respect people with a different culture. Only when individuals socialize in the real world can we expect a breakthrough in mutual respect and understanding. However, Sometimes these travels can increase tension between nations if cultural backgrounds have not been considered in advance. A typical example of this happened when a group of western tourists hit an angry bull in New Delhi. While this was interpreted as an unforgiven insult to local people, the tour leader guide described it simply as self-defense against the attacking bull. Another example happened in Islamabad when a British visitor walked inside a masque while she had her shoes on. A majority of local people consider such misunderstanding a severely obvious violation to of their values which can lead to racial hatred. To cut a long story short, though with the growth of travels a few more disputes between people have been observed, the advantage gained by this growth is an indisputable fact. The advocates of this otherwise perfect growing habit amongst people opine that not only can this growth lead to world peace, but it also is beneficial to lower local unrest in countries by teaching people to respect other believes beliefs and rights.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Anahita, Punishment 2019-12-30T17:34:02+00:00 2019-12-30T17:34:02+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/458-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-10-06/3301-anahita-punishment Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Anahita, Punishment.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is Necessary to help them this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior with children? The distinction between good and evil or right from wrong is one of the crucial stuff issues which parents and teachers should consider at the early ages of a child because at this age the child’s character be is formed. Although some parents and teachers are agree with punishment I entirely disagree. Punishment is not necessary because this method might be harmful for them. Teaching children at the early age could directly effect onaffect a child’s future, . therefore, learning and create creating the ability to telling wrong and right is one of the most important parent’s duty. Choosing the best method to obtain this goal is more necessary than punishment. Punishment in early ages might entail many negative consequences. Therefore, considering to the age of a child is important. I mean that, to for younger group ranges ofof group parents and teachers could superseded punishment towith other methods such as detention, withdrawal of privileges or even time-out and in some rare cases smooth punishment instead of cruel or harsh one. One of the most important factor for learning different between right and wrong are the models. Parents, teachers and even family are main models for children and for good parenting, they should try to provide good role modeling by their own behavior. Another factor is considering to the child character. Parents should allowed to their children to telling tell the truth without any panic or stress for being punishment. In consequences, parents and teachers are play the main roleled and making assessment to the children’s age and character and giving them space are so impressive to the child’s upbringing.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Anahita, Punishment.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is Necessary to help them this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior with children? The distinction between good and evil or right from wrong is one of the crucial stuff issues which parents and teachers should consider at the early ages of a child because at this age the child’s character be is formed. Although some parents and teachers are agree with punishment I entirely disagree. Punishment is not necessary because this method might be harmful for them. Teaching children at the early age could directly effect onaffect a child’s future, . therefore, learning and create creating the ability to telling wrong and right is one of the most important parent’s duty. Choosing the best method to obtain this goal is more necessary than punishment. Punishment in early ages might entail many negative consequences. Therefore, considering to the age of a child is important. I mean that, to for younger group ranges ofof group parents and teachers could superseded punishment towith other methods such as detention, withdrawal of privileges or even time-out and in some rare cases smooth punishment instead of cruel or harsh one. One of the most important factor for learning different between right and wrong are the models. Parents, teachers and even family are main models for children and for good parenting, they should try to provide good role modeling by their own behavior. Another factor is considering to the child character. Parents should allowed to their children to telling tell the truth without any panic or stress for being punishment. In consequences, parents and teachers are play the main roleled and making assessment to the children’s age and character and giving them space are so impressive to the child’s upbringing.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Daniel Derakhshani, Children 2019-12-30T17:33:49+00:00 2019-12-30T17:33:49+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/458-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-10-06/3300-daniel-derakhshani-children Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Daniel Derakhshani, Children.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views? Generally, school for children of around the age six is a social place. Where they can socialize with other children and the teachers doing the effort of educate them. Also, it is the best age to learn all sorts of important skills that will later help them in their life. For instance, a second language is extremely useful and it is a requirement nowadays. Kids have an immense amount of potential to learn besides socializing. Aside of from forming plenty of friendships, the opportunity of entering a group that are in your age will have an everlasting memory of entertainment for them that they can tirelessly describe for everyone. Although, aside of from the positive aspects schools can have for them, a formal education system is not recommended for everyone at any age and has eye catching deep/yawning gaps on in it that are not visible from the surface. The gaps can be so wide that they can make the positive appearance seem like a shallow perspective. In a large major system, not every individual is working to make the wheels move. There may be some inappropriate classmates that can mentally harm others or some teachers who don’t take the responsibility to update their knowledge to do the job as they should. The uninstructed people in this system reconstruct it to a pointless system and toxic schoolmates can either have a contagious toxicity or can cause trauma for children with weak mentality. Overall, talking about systematic abuse and traumatic experiences, I believe we should let the children to experience childhood with all its glory and let them decide if they want to participate in a formal education class without to compelling them to do so. However, it can be beneficial later on if children experience it with small steps what they have to go through and it is uncertain if it realistically helps them.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Daniel Derakhshani, Children.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views? Generally, school for children of around the age six is a social place. Where they can socialize with other children and the teachers doing the effort of educate them. Also, it is the best age to learn all sorts of important skills that will later help them in their life. For instance, a second language is extremely useful and it is a requirement nowadays. Kids have an immense amount of potential to learn besides socializing. Aside of from forming plenty of friendships, the opportunity of entering a group that are in your age will have an everlasting memory of entertainment for them that they can tirelessly describe for everyone. Although, aside of from the positive aspects schools can have for them, a formal education system is not recommended for everyone at any age and has eye catching deep/yawning gaps on in it that are not visible from the surface. The gaps can be so wide that they can make the positive appearance seem like a shallow perspective. In a large major system, not every individual is working to make the wheels move. There may be some inappropriate classmates that can mentally harm others or some teachers who don’t take the responsibility to update their knowledge to do the job as they should. The uninstructed people in this system reconstruct it to a pointless system and toxic schoolmates can either have a contagious toxicity or can cause trauma for children with weak mentality. Overall, talking about systematic abuse and traumatic experiences, I believe we should let the children to experience childhood with all its glory and let them decide if they want to participate in a formal education class without to compelling them to do so. However, it can be beneficial later on if children experience it with small steps what they have to go through and it is uncertain if it realistically helps them.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Elsa Shokrollahpour, Environment 2019-12-30T17:33:37+00:00 2019-12-30T17:33:37+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/458-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-10-06/3299-elsa-shokrollahpour-environment Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Elsa Shokrollahpour, Environment.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples. Nowadays, global warming is one of the main concerns of human beings, which occurs by burning fossil fuels. May by Burning small amounts of gas and oil, mankind can generate huge amounts of energy, but apart from the pros, I tend to agree that the environment can be negatively affected by this fuels. The main disadvantage of using fossil fuels is the pollution they caused. Well documented by scientists throughout the world, the problems are caused as a direct result of burning fossil fuels. Carbon dioxide is released into the air when fossil fuels are burned. This has been directly linked to global warming and making fossil fuels very dangerous to the general health of our planet. Also, Pollution-related diseases kills millions of people a year. People who live in areas with a large amount of traffic are at high risk. In addition, required requiring the huge amounts of coal, power stations will keep working. This means that either power stations need to be built very close to large deposits (or coal reservoir ) of coal, or that the coal needs to be shipped miles away to the nearest power station, which requires more power. These methods of generating electricity can, therefore, be incredibly expensive, and the prices are due to keep on rising as the fuel shortage worsens. However, luckily more effort is being put into finding alternative sources of energy such as renewable sources like sunlight and wind. For instance, through green manufacturing, producers are trying to use solar panels instead of fuels for producing the needed energy for the equipment. Also, in environment-friendly warehouses thestorage and retrieval are done by robots which utilize electricity produces produced by renewable energy. To sum up, Replacing coal and other contaminating fuels with solar and wind power should be a high priority not only for governments but also for citizens as the costs are outweighed by out weighted the benefits.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Elsa Shokrollahpour, Environment.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples. Nowadays, global warming is one of the main concerns of human beings, which occurs by burning fossil fuels. May by Burning small amounts of gas and oil, mankind can generate huge amounts of energy, but apart from the pros, I tend to agree that the environment can be negatively affected by this fuels. The main disadvantage of using fossil fuels is the pollution they caused. Well documented by scientists throughout the world, the problems are caused as a direct result of burning fossil fuels. Carbon dioxide is released into the air when fossil fuels are burned. This has been directly linked to global warming and making fossil fuels very dangerous to the general health of our planet. Also, Pollution-related diseases kills millions of people a year. People who live in areas with a large amount of traffic are at high risk. In addition, required requiring the huge amounts of coal, power stations will keep working. This means that either power stations need to be built very close to large deposits (or coal reservoir ) of coal, or that the coal needs to be shipped miles away to the nearest power station, which requires more power. These methods of generating electricity can, therefore, be incredibly expensive, and the prices are due to keep on rising as the fuel shortage worsens. However, luckily more effort is being put into finding alternative sources of energy such as renewable sources like sunlight and wind. For instance, through green manufacturing, producers are trying to use solar panels instead of fuels for producing the needed energy for the equipment. Also, in environment-friendly warehouses thestorage and retrieval are done by robots which utilize electricity produces produced by renewable energy. To sum up, Replacing coal and other contaminating fuels with solar and wind power should be a high priority not only for governments but also for citizens as the costs are outweighed by out weighted the benefits.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Mostafa, Overweight Children 2019-12-30T17:33:26+00:00 2019-12-30T17:33:26+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/458-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-10-06/3298-mostafa-overweight-children Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Mostafa, Overweight Children.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. It is fair to say that obesity among children is a big challenge in the modern world. This essay will analyze why some children suffer from these issues and also survey the impacts on the toddlers. On the one hand, there are a number of likely explanations why some children have been faced with overweight recently. The most obvious one could be their diet. This would mean that they are served fast food which not only is not nutritious but also genetically modified (GM). Another factor might be that they prefer staying home and playing games with their siblings to going out and doing outdoor activities, so this sedentary life can lead to a serious problem in children’s healthy, one of which which one of them is obesity. It is universally accepted that obesity has some dire consequences. The most serious one would be that overweight children might encounter with some disease. This is problematic for the a simple reason, because most doctors believe that obesity is directly associated with/related to blood pressure, diabetes and other incurable illness. And the second devastating effect might be that they become tired early when they are doing their homework and also playing sports in comparison with their fellows/peers. it is probable that it can have a bad/adverse effect on the performance of their brain. To sum up, it is essential that parents oversee their children’s meals and do not allow them to eat fast food frequently; moreover, the government must put a ban on importing any substance, which is not appropriate for healthy.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Mostafa, Overweight Children.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. It is fair to say that obesity among children is a big challenge in the modern world. This essay will analyze why some children suffer from these issues and also survey the impacts on the toddlers. On the one hand, there are a number of likely explanations why some children have been faced with overweight recently. The most obvious one could be their diet. This would mean that they are served fast food which not only is not nutritious but also genetically modified (GM). Another factor might be that they prefer staying home and playing games with their siblings to going out and doing outdoor activities, so this sedentary life can lead to a serious problem in children’s healthy, one of which which one of them is obesity. It is universally accepted that obesity has some dire consequences. The most serious one would be that overweight children might encounter with some disease. This is problematic for the a simple reason, because most doctors believe that obesity is directly associated with/related to blood pressure, diabetes and other incurable illness. And the second devastating effect might be that they become tired early when they are doing their homework and also playing sports in comparison with their fellows/peers. it is probable that it can have a bad/adverse effect on the performance of their brain. To sum up, it is essential that parents oversee their children’s meals and do not allow them to eat fast food frequently; moreover, the government must put a ban on importing any substance, which is not appropriate for healthy.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Shideh, Children 2019-12-30T17:33:14+00:00 2019-12-30T17:33:14+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/458-fridays-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-friday-98-10-06/3297-shideh-children Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Shideh, Children.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Helping children understand the natural and positive consequences of their actions is conducive to healthy development. However, types of sanctions’ modes in proper age cannot be exempt that if they choose inappropriately by parents, they will not affect efficiently in nurturing a child. Teaching children right from wrong as well as acceptable behavior must be considered the steps of child’s growth, although explaining these rules in age-appropriate terms without any corporal physical punishment or verbal abuse is imperative which can entails lots of negative effects in their future such as getting used to misbehaving like beating and hurting others even in their adulthood. Obviously, how old a child is plays a crucial role in disciplining. For instance, an infant or a toddler cannot distinguish why some acts are not recommended, so when they reach a certain age, they could be encouraged and rewarded for behaving properly in contrast to the discouraging due to disobedience. Both parents and teachers must manage and model their behavior with calm words and actions consistently and then if a penalty is needed, they could regard impose some limitation to inform children. Recently, there have been a variety of modern means to apply against young chargers like loss withdrawal of privileges or time-outs within family and also in the schools, trainers should fit the punishment to the crime such as collecting litter or cleaning the school yard. Therefore, not only does children’s awareness of the value of social behaving increase, but also their sense of responsibility and confidence will improve gradually. In conclusion, by using reasonable and effective discipline methods, rather than either hitting or harsh spanking, we can help provide a solid foundation for children to grow into productive members of society.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1398/Writing Workshop Friday 98.10.06/Shideh, Children.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Helping children understand the natural and positive consequences of their actions is conducive to healthy development. However, types of sanctions’ modes in proper age cannot be exempt that if they choose inappropriately by parents, they will not affect efficiently in nurturing a child. Teaching children right from wrong as well as acceptable behavior must be considered the steps of child’s growth, although explaining these rules in age-appropriate terms without any corporal physical punishment or verbal abuse is imperative which can entails lots of negative effects in their future such as getting used to misbehaving like beating and hurting others even in their adulthood. Obviously, how old a child is plays a crucial role in disciplining. For instance, an infant or a toddler cannot distinguish why some acts are not recommended, so when they reach a certain age, they could be encouraged and rewarded for behaving properly in contrast to the discouraging due to disobedience. Both parents and teachers must manage and model their behavior with calm words and actions consistently and then if a penalty is needed, they could regard impose some limitation to inform children. Recently, there have been a variety of modern means to apply against young chargers like loss withdrawal of privileges or time-outs within family and also in the schools, trainers should fit the punishment to the crime such as collecting litter or cleaning the school yard. Therefore, not only does children’s awareness of the value of social behaving increase, but also their sense of responsibility and confidence will improve gradually. In conclusion, by using reasonable and effective discipline methods, rather than either hitting or harsh spanking, we can help provide a solid foundation for children to grow into productive members of society.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table>