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Aida Mofakhami, Foreign Language

2019-09-21T05:43:18+00:00

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both and give your own opinion. Living in the global village, whose citizens are increasingly getting close to each other through travelling or the media, underpins the importance of learning foreign languages. There are two opposing views toward this issue. While the first group believe that the sole reasons for learning a foreign language are travelling or working, the others state that there are more other causes of learning a new dialect. Although my own opinion is more inclined toward the latter group, I will discuss both ideas in the followings. On one side, since migration has become a new trend among most nations, it seems knowing a second language other than their native language one can be very beneficial for those who decide to leave their home country in the hope for of making a living in another place because it would considerably enhance their chance of finding a decent job if they could speak fluently the language of that country. Moreover, it would be much easier to interact with people when you know their language well and It would prevent from misunderstandings which are caused by lacking in language knowledge. On the other side, being able to understand an international language like “English” could have many advantages even when you live in your homeland. For example, having a large amount of articles written in English, a university student can have a great access to the science world if she knows English. Therefore, it is definitely a good opportunity for everyone to learn at least one foreign language regardless of their intention for travelling to a different region. In conclusion, although it is a necessity for immigrants to learn the language of their destination, it is not the only reason for it. Being able to speak in another language has now become a must by which you can understand the world better, in other words, not only is multilingualism a skill for your longterm success, but also a useful means which widens your lookhorizons. Reza

Alireza Davari, Immigration

2019-09-21T05:42:59+00:00

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? Immigration has a considerable impact on the modern society. especially in the field of economics economy and each year more people decide to leave their home country and move to another place.there are important reasons which in these this essay i will mention them. In my point of view there are two main reasons of immigration which they are initially the search of better job opportunities and as a result of that reach to the higher salary and secondly creating a safe future for their families.for example in my country individuals decide to immigration because of lack of enough employment opportunities and unfair allocation of wealth and facilities between strata of society. Moreover, deprivation of security of politically and socially that has created creates social and cultural conflicts which pushes people to leave their homeland. On the other hand there are disadvantages in particularly for both immigrants and destination of countries for instance not having dominant to language of the host country and the opposite of their expectation they would can notnot be able to find appropriate jobs and itwhich makes they themhave frustrated.as well as for host countries have brought with it population growth and problems which they are related to the maintenance keeping of immigration immigrants so it is necessary that countries have some kinds of supporting programs for immigrants. In conclusion, i think that people immigrate to have a better life prospects so it is very important to consider all of the outcomes of immigration and then decide to whether leaving your home country is worth it. Sent from my iPhone

Amir G, Leaving Parents

2019-09-21T05:42:46+00:00

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Some people think that it is best to encourage children to leave their family home as soon as possible. Others believe children should stay at the family home for as long as they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. At what age children can leave their parents’ home has once again come under the spotlight making many people think about it. While a majority of members of society hold the idea that it is to the benefit of both children and society not to leave home until a certain age, the opponents strongly argue that the sooner they leave home the sooner they can find their role in their society. Many children in western families prefer to live on their own as soon as they succeeded to become financially independent. This independence, though pleasant, has its own drawbacks, and perhaps the most significant disadvantage of it is the unlimited freedom children experience. Lived Living under close control of parents for so many years, children may get involved in wrongdoing if they are not matured enough. Substance abuse, binge drinking and unplanned pregnancy are notable examples of potentially dangerous threats targeting teenagers who are not living with their parents. On the other hand, leaving parents’ place as early as the age of consent is not that much horrible. It provides children with a myriad of priceless opportunities to experience the reality of life, hence its importance. Scarcely can those who live with their parents experience what life means. Not only does living independently empower children financially, but it also paves the way forward for a stronger emotional personality. To cut a long story short, my vote as an adult who was born and bred in an eastern valued culture goes to leave parents’ home after the age of consent. Only when children start living alone at an early age, can we expect to have adults who learnt how to stand on their feet before their thirties. Nonetheless, the remote intangible control of parents over children as an invaluable factor at play should not be overlooked.

Bayan Nadimi, Water Pollution

2019-09-21T05:42:32+00:00

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? Water pollution is a less- discussed form of pollution and one which have disastrous effects on the people and fauna. There seem to be some main causes and numbers of effects. Possibly the main cause is the industrial effluents, majority of Industries are situated along the bank of rivers such as paper industries for the requirement of enormous amount of water in manufacturing process and eventually the wastes containing chemicals are poured down into rivers. Another wellknown cause is human activities that can affect water pollution directly such as throwing sewage into rivers and ocean, using fertilizer and littering include glass and plastic into the water and indirect human effects on water pollution is by cars emission that causes air pollution and then acid rain which pollutes the environment and becomes a health problem for human and animals. The effects of this problem on biosphere is quiet serious. water contaminate can leads to detrimental effects on human health including poisoning of drinking ,famine or drought. Pollutants in the water such as lead are eaten by fish and the food chain continues to be disrupted and finally humans are affected by this process. Also water pollution makes the life of aquatic organism miserable by reducing the level of oxygen on it and they consequently dying due to the lack of oxygen. Overall, water pollution is dangerous for all life forms in this universe, . pollution of water leads to several illness for human and it causes the extinction of animals .To protect human beings and the ecosystem it is urgent to find out some solution for this problem..

Danial Derakhshan, Dealing With The Poor

2019-09-21T05:42:18+00:00

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty ? What can we do to help the poor ? ————- According to the statistics, nowadays, the world is suffering less from poverty then before. However, these statistics have their ups and downs. Unfortunately, aside of all the positive information and graphs, the human race is still facing this issue. Decades ago, poverty was due to the monstrous growth in population, Mostly in large countries like India or China. Centuries ago, history has taught us that powerful politicians, the rich and royal families were the cause of poverty by being greedy or by colonizing a country. This all being said, present day poverty is still not only from population, but also still, the poor is being ripped off by the powerful. A countries country’s wealth always depends severely on it’s its political status and geographical position. For instance a bipolar polarized extremist society is most likely to suffer from economic crisiscrises. However, as said before, we are globally making progress in fighting poverty by creating a charity NGOsof them. And some wealthy generous people are making moves for countries in need of help. The issue with poverty can be fixed if humans care about each other and a society has to have flexible political views to make the correct choice and instate promote justice.

Iman, Learn More From Same-Levels

2019-09-21T05:42:03+00:00

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Agree-Disagree People learn things better from those at their own level– such as fellow students or co-workers- than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors. Living a world full of different types of people and life-styles, it is not that easy for me to take a deterministic point of view toward the stated claim whereas all of us are exposed to many a varied learning situation which are sometimes handling by other people and able to effectively influence the learning process. Nonetheless, I likely agree that we can learn better from the holders of our same levels, though sometimes it can be totally reversed. Constructing between at least two points, learning is a process which concludes many attributes besides the one who is teaching. Actually, the main article is the learner who should be open to the process. only when you become open to others, will you let them to teach you. Rarely can you find a person efficiently able to absorb information from a dramatically weak person in terms of relationships, though he would might be a respectfully knowledgeable man in a specific field. “Had I have a nice math teacher instead of that sadly aggressive man, I would have chosen a different field of study.” a teacher of mine saying to me always. Sharing having a lot in samecommon, people are more related to their peers in every aspect including age or position, so they develop a friendlier atmosphere between themselves which causes helps trust permeates their relationships, thereby creating a more positively common ground to learn from each other. Boss-employee relation, taking as an example, promoting a dictating and demanding air more, renders people unlikely to hold a friendship between each other. Simply put, people not only have a better relation with those who are in at the same level with them, like students and their peers, but also they share a lot more time with them, which gives them a sense of trust as the base of better learning process. Enjoying a wider background in a specific field, on the other hand, higher level people have a lot to teach. Either shouldered countless responsibilities and dramatic situations or experienced ages of teaching, teachers or supervisors can serve as great sources to teach, provided a pair of trusting ears for the learner of course exists. In a nutshell, being knowledgeable to be a good source to attract ears is a sine qua non but not adequate. In fact, people are more interested to learn from those whom are relationally trusted which gives same-level people the upper hand in thisissue; those who not only does the person share a considerable time with, but also are more ready to develop a relationship with.

Learning a Foreign Language

2019-09-21T05:41:47+00:00

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Today, in this global village, the relation among nations has been increased remarkably. Goes are the days that people only stayed in touch with their relatives and local people, so a large proportion of people are trying to teach a foreign language to their children, as an early age, but the true time for doing this is brought into question. To begin with, primary school is a significantly crucial period of any human’s life, because acquisition of basic roots of a vast range of abilities in terms of cognitivecognition, mind and physic physique refers to this time. Moreover, children benefit from a high ability of receiving and learning any new activities, so that considerable information can be received just by spending a slight time on it, compared to adulthood. Having said that, if children in the primary school still struggle with their mother tongue yet, by which I mean they may have some structural problems which unable them to use that properly, it would be a suffer for them to learn a new one, adding a new challenge. On the other hand, although pupils in the secondary school still have a lot of learning abilities, they are going to enter the puberty period and consequently they are involved with some adolescence difficulties, such as changes occurring in their body and behavior, so distraction will become a common problem when they are studying to learn a new language. However, this can be solved with more exercise to improve their concentration on their lessons. Taking everything into consideration, I personally opine that the primary school is the best time to learn a foreign language. In this time not only do children possess a considerable ability to learn, but also they are getting rid of any anxiety about their surrounding world, provided that they fully fulfill whatever necessitate necessary for learning their mother language, before starting to learn a new one.

Mj Berangi, Average Weight

2019-09-21T05:41:30+00:00

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? in today’s world, health issues, especially the matter of obesity is one of the gravest problems of different countries. There are several origins and remedies for this phenomenon which will be discussed in this essay. Perhaps the main reason for resurgence of obesity in some countries is the perpetuation of consumerism. In fact, as time goes by, the number of advertisements which encourage people to eat and consume more are soaring. One salient example of this is the Macdonald’s chain restaurants which present cheap and scrumptious food to people. Another root of this problem is the inexorable development of technology. As a matter of fact, modern life is surrounded by an avalanche of different technological gadgets and applications easing the process of every daily task which might appears attractive at the first inspection, but in a deeper insight its problems will be revealed. For example, people nowadays prefer to do most of their bank imperative tasks through using the internet. This leads to a decrease in the level of their activity and can be a breeding ground for exacerbating the rise in people’s average weight and generally health issues. Turning to possible remedies for this problem, the first solution will be putting some restrictions on advertisements of junk foods. In this stage, this is the duty of the government that by legislating proper laws to put some stumbling blocks on in the way of companies and people who produce these types of foods. The problem is huge enough that transcends the government, and so families should have participation in solving this problem. By which I mean, families should put time for preparing homemade and healthy meals for their children and also give them some advice about consumption of junk foods and lack of exercise. Overall, it seems that the origins of this problem are laying behind the spread of consumerism and technological advancements in some countries and suitable governmental legislation, caring and education from families are the means for wrestling with this problem. Time: 42 min

Mohamed, Bicycles

2019-09-21T05:41:16+00:00

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Nowadays people mostly use cars rather than bicycles as a transportation preference. What effects are caused by this trend? What can be done to encourage the public to use bicycles more? Most people around the world now prefer cars to other means of transportation and this change in tendency from the birth of these troublesome inventions has brought about major problems. Viable approaches, however, seem to be within the sight. The demand for owning and using personal motor vehicles has increased since the arrival of cars, reducing the use of bicycles to a curiosity in many big cities. This, although it may seem as natural as other trends aiming to bring convenience and pleasure to humans, has resulted in a number of pressing problems. First, air pollution has risen to unacceptable levels in many parts of the world. Exhaust fumes pouring out of cars is taking a heavy toll on their producer’s producers’ health, presenting them with death or at least various diseases with every breath they take. According to studies, the transport sector is to blame for nearly a third of emissions of carbon dioxide, the leading greenhouse gas. Second, cars are one of the main reasons for the current sedentary lifestyle. So heavily dependent are now humans on their loved iron draught animals that they rarely seem to traverse for even short distances without the aid of their faithful companies. This intimacy, however, has come at a price as many diseases stem from such inactivity. Nonetheless, efforts can be made to achieve a modal shift and reverse the trend. The first approach, which consists of a series of measures, would be promoting the culture of using bikes. Bike-sharing schemes can be devised in urban areas, for example, to encourage people to abandon their cars and use bikes distributed in various stations in the city. This plan, currently practiced in a number of famous cities in the world, has not only fairly resolved fairly the environmental problems caused by fossil fuel-powered vehicles but made other substantial contributions such as traffic flow reduction and a fall in accidents. Another significant approach could be arousing the interest of citizens in using bikes, raising their consciousness of the consequences threatening both their environment and health. From distributing leaflets and setting up educational programs to restricting roads taking either informative or precautionary measures can lead to revitalizing the use of cycles. To conclude, in spite of the dominance of personal transport, the urge for bringing bikes to the power again and considering them the first option among different modes of transport should be felt by both individuals and authorities through different approaches.