Fridays GMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم تلفن: 42-88679341 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26 2024-04-28T00:19:38+00:00 IELTSTOEFLCENTER info@ieltstoeflcenter.com Joomla! - Open Source Content Management Alternative Energy, Faeghe Moosavi 2016-12-16T16:19:41+00:00 2016-12-16T16:19:41+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1050-alternative-energy-faeghe-moosavi <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Alternative Energy, Faeghe Moosavi.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Because of limited fossil fuels energy, it is was logical that states people turned to use other sources of energy such as solar, wind and waves. It either takes more money to equip facilitate our cars or even use it these types of energy in transport systems, but we should care about its benefit. Although producing power from green sources is expensive, it would be economical in long term. To put it in perspective, we have needed extra amounts of energy in a sustainable development; it means that huge industries, a large number of people and many cars that are have produced each year required energy. Not only do they need much energy, but it has to be clean energy.supplementary, they need clean. Moreover, these kinds of green energies have helped us to have a clean environment and it leads to improvement of the environment. If the government adopts/takes these methods to producet energy and power, it will provide economic growth for society. In contrast, we have more difficulties producing to produce energy from natural sources. For example, we should have located wind turbines in a vast and flat areas where no mountains exist near them. Furthermore, they never placed where any airports beside them so that because of airplanes could have safe takeoff and landing. All of the facilities or finding locations need extravagant financing and extensive or even time-consuming long duration studies. Besides, fossil energies belong to a small part of the world, especially Middle East and it was limited and not forever. Nowadays the government has known that they should find other sources of energy to reduce their expenses and even reached the higher productivity. However, it seems costly.looks manifold.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Alternative Energy, Faeghe Moosavi.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Because of limited fossil fuels energy, it is was logical that states people turned to use other sources of energy such as solar, wind and waves. It either takes more money to equip facilitate our cars or even use it these types of energy in transport systems, but we should care about its benefit. Although producing power from green sources is expensive, it would be economical in long term. To put it in perspective, we have needed extra amounts of energy in a sustainable development; it means that huge industries, a large number of people and many cars that are have produced each year required energy. Not only do they need much energy, but it has to be clean energy.supplementary, they need clean. Moreover, these kinds of green energies have helped us to have a clean environment and it leads to improvement of the environment. If the government adopts/takes these methods to producet energy and power, it will provide economic growth for society. In contrast, we have more difficulties producing to produce energy from natural sources. For example, we should have located wind turbines in a vast and flat areas where no mountains exist near them. Furthermore, they never placed where any airports beside them so that because of airplanes could have safe takeoff and landing. All of the facilities or finding locations need extravagant financing and extensive or even time-consuming long duration studies. Besides, fossil energies belong to a small part of the world, especially Middle East and it was limited and not forever. Nowadays the government has known that they should find other sources of energy to reduce their expenses and even reached the higher productivity. However, it seems costly.looks manifold.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Certain Talents, Farzaneh Momeni 2016-12-16T16:18:58+00:00 2016-12-16T16:18:58+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1049-certain-talents-farzaneh-momeni <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Certain Talents, Farzaneh Momeni.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. The importance of natural talents has have become a big topic of debates these days. many believe that people are born with certain talents and others not. furthermore, some argue any child without the same special gift could be equal compeer with talented people if they practice enough. Although today's education systems along with professional methods are very so powerful in to training children in the a best way , innate skills of some talented people could not be ignored/disregarded.have not be condone easily . moreover, many geniuses had never participated contribute in to any professional training or educational systems whilst they were children, but they still had made significant progress in science throughout the world . In my opinion, by applying adequate procedures in educational systems any child can be taught only to become a good sports person or musician, even if he/she has not peculiar gift at all, and yet however much training they have received trained, they could never be compared to people who have natural qualities inasmuch as not only is being a genius does not related to particular methods but it is also dependent on specific talents. To sum up, I agree that any children could afford to become a good artist musician or sportsperson person , but to be flourish in an ideal area, some natural aptitudes are required. Farzane</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Certain Talents, Farzaneh Momeni.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. The importance of natural talents has have become a big topic of debates these days. many believe that people are born with certain talents and others not. furthermore, some argue any child without the same special gift could be equal compeer with talented people if they practice enough. Although today's education systems along with professional methods are very so powerful in to training children in the a best way , innate skills of some talented people could not be ignored/disregarded.have not be condone easily . moreover, many geniuses had never participated contribute in to any professional training or educational systems whilst they were children, but they still had made significant progress in science throughout the world . In my opinion, by applying adequate procedures in educational systems any child can be taught only to become a good sports person or musician, even if he/she has not peculiar gift at all, and yet however much training they have received trained, they could never be compared to people who have natural qualities inasmuch as not only is being a genius does not related to particular methods but it is also dependent on specific talents. To sum up, I agree that any children could afford to become a good artist musician or sportsperson person , but to be flourish in an ideal area, some natural aptitudes are required. Farzane</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Essay, Massi 2016-12-16T16:18:36+00:00 2016-12-16T16:18:36+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1048-essay-massi <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Essay, Massi.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">First and foremost, under the dominant interpellating voice of the US, characters have lost their identity. This feeling of confusion and alienation is seen perfectly in this novel. Furthermore, in order to explain how people take ideology for granted and accept it as an obvious fact, Althusser uses the term reconnaissance, “ misrecognition” borrowed from the work of psychoanalyst ,Jacque Lacan,. It holds the connotation of desire. According To Lacan, we go through some process as we grow up that leaves us incomplete. In order to fill this gap, we misrepresent the world in ideology. July as a black migrant cannot work and go anywhere without the pass-book which “his employer had to sign every month” (135).This means he is under the impact of political values of the white and is a marginalized migrant who his whose rights are denied by Apartheid. Moreover, July is influenced by economic impact. Similar to white people, the black’s main concern is money: “Afrikan people like money”(70).July puts his salary under his pillow but following Maureen and Bam’s persuasion he takes advantage of keeping money in the bank. He is surprised by this system when he finds out each month mouth an extra amount of money without working goes to his savings-book. Moreover, July’s name is chosen by his masters, Maureen and Bam, while his real name is Mawate. Therefore, Gordimer wants to draw attention to the duality of his identity and based on the idea of Althusser this ideology exists in the world. Second, In addition to pass-book, speaking in English helps July work for Smale, but he speaks in “broken English” and “often Bam couldn’t follow his broken English”(13). July is never able to use the English language to talk about his experiences he has had in African culture because they do not have any equivalents in English to express his mind. Gordimer refers to/draws attention to this matter when the Smales observes the “gumba-gamba,” which is a red box, as an equivalent of a “traveling entertainment” and their children know the name of his instrument “ in the villager's people’s language but not in their own”(140). The main point about Maureen is her inability to talk in African, so she cannot communicate with the black. By pointing out Maureen’s inability to communicate with the black, Gordimer wants to draw attention to the importance of language and culture for mutual understanding. She also suggests how migrants are being misunderstood and as a result their rights are being denied. As a result, from an Althuseerian point of view, there is not any absolute identity, identity which is defined based on ideology. Moreover, Gordimer believes that an individual’s identity is based on the routine life, and in the confrontation with new circumstances is changed. While in the city he has to obey the white people’s laws and ways(112).July has to obey what his master demands; he has been living with a family called the Smales for fifteen years as a black servant servent in the city and Smales provides everything for him. Therefore, Dullness, alienation, hidden anger and depression are the result of living in a capitalist society.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Essay, Massi.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">First and foremost, under the dominant interpellating voice of the US, characters have lost their identity. This feeling of confusion and alienation is seen perfectly in this novel. Furthermore, in order to explain how people take ideology for granted and accept it as an obvious fact, Althusser uses the term reconnaissance, “ misrecognition” borrowed from the work of psychoanalyst ,Jacque Lacan,. It holds the connotation of desire. According To Lacan, we go through some process as we grow up that leaves us incomplete. In order to fill this gap, we misrepresent the world in ideology. July as a black migrant cannot work and go anywhere without the pass-book which “his employer had to sign every month” (135).This means he is under the impact of political values of the white and is a marginalized migrant who his whose rights are denied by Apartheid. Moreover, July is influenced by economic impact. Similar to white people, the black’s main concern is money: “Afrikan people like money”(70).July puts his salary under his pillow but following Maureen and Bam’s persuasion he takes advantage of keeping money in the bank. He is surprised by this system when he finds out each month mouth an extra amount of money without working goes to his savings-book. Moreover, July’s name is chosen by his masters, Maureen and Bam, while his real name is Mawate. Therefore, Gordimer wants to draw attention to the duality of his identity and based on the idea of Althusser this ideology exists in the world. Second, In addition to pass-book, speaking in English helps July work for Smale, but he speaks in “broken English” and “often Bam couldn’t follow his broken English”(13). July is never able to use the English language to talk about his experiences he has had in African culture because they do not have any equivalents in English to express his mind. Gordimer refers to/draws attention to this matter when the Smales observes the “gumba-gamba,” which is a red box, as an equivalent of a “traveling entertainment” and their children know the name of his instrument “ in the villager's people’s language but not in their own”(140). The main point about Maureen is her inability to talk in African, so she cannot communicate with the black. By pointing out Maureen’s inability to communicate with the black, Gordimer wants to draw attention to the importance of language and culture for mutual understanding. She also suggests how migrants are being misunderstood and as a result their rights are being denied. As a result, from an Althuseerian point of view, there is not any absolute identity, identity which is defined based on ideology. Moreover, Gordimer believes that an individual’s identity is based on the routine life, and in the confrontation with new circumstances is changed. While in the city he has to obey the white people’s laws and ways(112).July has to obey what his master demands; he has been living with a family called the Smales for fifteen years as a black servant servent in the city and Smales provides everything for him. Therefore, Dullness, alienation, hidden anger and depression are the result of living in a capitalist society.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Hydrogen Cars VS Benzene Cars, Kiarash 2016-12-16T16:17:44+00:00 2016-12-16T16:17:44+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1047-hydrogen-cars-vs-benzene-cars-kiarash <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Hydrogen Cars VS Benzene Cars, Kiarash.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">In this set of materials, the reading passage mainly discusses the necessity of superseding of benzene cars with the hydrogen-based ones. However, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and claims that although the considerations are correct and oil sources are finite, the hydrogen cars would not be a solution. First and foremost, in the text it is clearly asserted that replenishing cars with oil somedays would not be possible owing to the shortage of oil and the new approach, usage of hydrogen is inevitable, while, the presenter believes that despite of presence of hydrogen in water and other materials, achieving to pure liquid of hydrogen which is used to drive the cars is not easy enough and requires high technology and it is very artificial and cannot be derived by nature. Besides, there are some precautions that should be taken because of maintenance of hydrogen needs strict and rigid condition, such as a very low temperature environment. In addition, the lecturer disagrees with the idea that using oil pollutes the environment and this does is not occurred in hydrogen case. She points out that factories which are producing hydrogen emit lots of human emissions and pollution into the air and contaminate the environment. Finally, although in the text it is stated that expense of full-cell cars would be more attractive and costly , the professor subscribes to the view that the expense of platinum which is used to manufacture hydrogen cars is high, and moreover, there is are not any other substitution for this rare and precious material.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Hydrogen Cars VS Benzene Cars, Kiarash.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">In this set of materials, the reading passage mainly discusses the necessity of superseding of benzene cars with the hydrogen-based ones. However, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and claims that although the considerations are correct and oil sources are finite, the hydrogen cars would not be a solution. First and foremost, in the text it is clearly asserted that replenishing cars with oil somedays would not be possible owing to the shortage of oil and the new approach, usage of hydrogen is inevitable, while, the presenter believes that despite of presence of hydrogen in water and other materials, achieving to pure liquid of hydrogen which is used to drive the cars is not easy enough and requires high technology and it is very artificial and cannot be derived by nature. Besides, there are some precautions that should be taken because of maintenance of hydrogen needs strict and rigid condition, such as a very low temperature environment. In addition, the lecturer disagrees with the idea that using oil pollutes the environment and this does is not occurred in hydrogen case. She points out that factories which are producing hydrogen emit lots of human emissions and pollution into the air and contaminate the environment. Finally, although in the text it is stated that expense of full-cell cars would be more attractive and costly , the professor subscribes to the view that the expense of platinum which is used to manufacture hydrogen cars is high, and moreover, there is are not any other substitution for this rare and precious material.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Natural Resources, Arefeh 2016-12-16T16:17:11+00:00 2016-12-16T16:17:11+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1046-natural-resources-arefeh <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Natural Resources, Arefeh.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">In the future natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up. How can we save on resources? What alternative forms of energy available? One of the major problems today is the excessive consumption staggering amount of non-renewable natural energy resources. that are being used. Some experts say supplies may run out in near future. It is, therefore, extremely important that every effort should be made to cut down on the exploitation of resources used. There is also a pressing need to explore alternative energy sources. Statistics show that the majority of fossil fuels such as gas are consumed to run cars, so it proves that for curbing the use of fossil fuels it is necessary needed to make a significant change to cars we run. For example, owners of four-wheel-drive cars can replace them with hybrid cars or smaller standard-fuel cars because . Because, not only does a fuel-burning car with its poisonous exhaust fumes have has a devastating effect on our environment, but on oil supplies. Levying taxes on outdated cars which consume much more energy, governments can help in this regard. Moreover, people should be encouraged to use public transport. Cars are not the only drain on resources. The generation of electricity is also a major problem. Saving some electricity by using fewer electrical gadgets and turning off lights even for a few minutes could make a significant contribution to the reduction of energy consumption. However, energy saving is not enough. In the long term we must find alternative resources to meet our energy needs. The most commonly made suggestion is nuclear power, which generates large amounts of electricity and doesn’t cause major pollution. Furthermore, wind power, solar power and hydroelectric power are other forms in supplying energy that could be environmentally sustainable ways. In conclusion, I would argue that if governments have a hands-on approach and assume responsibility for this issue, in the first place, it will evoke people to take a responsibility of their own accord to minimize the waste of energy, otherwise . Otherwise it would be an insurmountable problem. Arefeh</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Natural Resources, Arefeh.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">In the future natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up. How can we save on resources? What alternative forms of energy available? One of the major problems today is the excessive consumption staggering amount of non-renewable natural energy resources. that are being used. Some experts say supplies may run out in near future. It is, therefore, extremely important that every effort should be made to cut down on the exploitation of resources used. There is also a pressing need to explore alternative energy sources. Statistics show that the majority of fossil fuels such as gas are consumed to run cars, so it proves that for curbing the use of fossil fuels it is necessary needed to make a significant change to cars we run. For example, owners of four-wheel-drive cars can replace them with hybrid cars or smaller standard-fuel cars because . Because, not only does a fuel-burning car with its poisonous exhaust fumes have has a devastating effect on our environment, but on oil supplies. Levying taxes on outdated cars which consume much more energy, governments can help in this regard. Moreover, people should be encouraged to use public transport. Cars are not the only drain on resources. The generation of electricity is also a major problem. Saving some electricity by using fewer electrical gadgets and turning off lights even for a few minutes could make a significant contribution to the reduction of energy consumption. However, energy saving is not enough. In the long term we must find alternative resources to meet our energy needs. The most commonly made suggestion is nuclear power, which generates large amounts of electricity and doesn’t cause major pollution. Furthermore, wind power, solar power and hydroelectric power are other forms in supplying energy that could be environmentally sustainable ways. In conclusion, I would argue that if governments have a hands-on approach and assume responsibility for this issue, in the first place, it will evoke people to take a responsibility of their own accord to minimize the waste of energy, otherwise . Otherwise it would be an insurmountable problem. Arefeh</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Prisons, Sanaz Nasr 2016-12-16T16:16:35+00:00 2016-12-16T16:16:35+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1045-prisons-sanaz-nasr <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Prisons, Sanaz Nasr.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people are of the opinion that prisons are basically universities of crime, fostering the kind of behavior they aim to eradicate, and are, not effective. Others feel that prison life is not hard enough. Discuss the arguments on both sides of the issue. what is your own opinion on the matter? The use of jail as a means of combatting to combat crime has always been a matter of debates and even becoming more so as a result of prison ’s population growth and crimes become more violent. Some people believe that prisons are merely a breeding ground for of criminals thus, they are not going to do the job that they are supposed to. Their finger is pointing to the incidence of reoffending among former jailbirds/inmates and the rise in the seriousness of felony committed by them. A young person imprisoned for a minor crime and comes out equipped with the skills to commit more serious ones. Consequently, if the internment/incarceration/imprisonment is wherefore deter people from harming society, this progress is not working properly. Whilst By contrast, others argue that jails are not harsh enough. In their view inmates in-mates lead a life of luxury inside at the expense of the taxpayers. They cited that keeping prisoners inside will cost a great deal of money for the government. In addition, from their perspective prison is a soft penalty for culprit's guilty’s felony. If they know that the consequence of their crime would not be dreadful, offenders will not be deterreding from committing that again. I am personally inclined to agree with the latter viewpoint. Although, to enact the tougher penalties tougher by regime with no sentence of remission is not a perfect panacea to all prisoners, it would be able to decrease the number of crimes happening. furthermore, making jailbirds busy by giving them responsibilities,; for instance giving them community services jobs on their leisure time and enhance their awareness by courses which related to how harmful crimes could be to society, might be helpful.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Prisons, Sanaz Nasr.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people are of the opinion that prisons are basically universities of crime, fostering the kind of behavior they aim to eradicate, and are, not effective. Others feel that prison life is not hard enough. Discuss the arguments on both sides of the issue. what is your own opinion on the matter? The use of jail as a means of combatting to combat crime has always been a matter of debates and even becoming more so as a result of prison ’s population growth and crimes become more violent. Some people believe that prisons are merely a breeding ground for of criminals thus, they are not going to do the job that they are supposed to. Their finger is pointing to the incidence of reoffending among former jailbirds/inmates and the rise in the seriousness of felony committed by them. A young person imprisoned for a minor crime and comes out equipped with the skills to commit more serious ones. Consequently, if the internment/incarceration/imprisonment is wherefore deter people from harming society, this progress is not working properly. Whilst By contrast, others argue that jails are not harsh enough. In their view inmates in-mates lead a life of luxury inside at the expense of the taxpayers. They cited that keeping prisoners inside will cost a great deal of money for the government. In addition, from their perspective prison is a soft penalty for culprit's guilty’s felony. If they know that the consequence of their crime would not be dreadful, offenders will not be deterreding from committing that again. I am personally inclined to agree with the latter viewpoint. Although, to enact the tougher penalties tougher by regime with no sentence of remission is not a perfect panacea to all prisoners, it would be able to decrease the number of crimes happening. furthermore, making jailbirds busy by giving them responsibilities,; for instance giving them community services jobs on their leisure time and enhance their awareness by courses which related to how harmful crimes could be to society, might be helpful.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Some People Think that all University Students Should Study Whatever They Like, Maryam Attar 2016-12-16T16:15:04+00:00 2016-12-16T16:15:04+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1044-some-people-think-that-all-university-students-should-study-whatever-they-like-maryam-attar <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Some People Think that all University Students Should Study Whatever They Like, Maryam Attar.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. A large number of school leavers tend to pursue their goals through tertiary education, which provides them with a vast range of field study choices. While some people argue that university students should be channeled into studying science and technology-related subjects, there are some, who are not on board with this mentality, and believe that we should give young members a free rein to follow their favorite fields. The first group, who does not agree with the autonomy of choosing the study field for university students, accepts that just scientific and technological issues can offer a wider scope of employability for the young individuals. Moreover, with the technology on the rise, there would be more positions for research proposed by the growing industries. For instance, a considerable number of parents force their adults to choose an engineering major or medical science, since they think these fields are accompanied by the higher social position, which they can be proud of. In addition, they assert their great income is another advantage which is worthy of consideration. On the other hand, the second group holds this opinion that from a the psychological point of view, students should have the freedom to opt for their favorite study subjects, and believe a prosperous society needs artists, athletes, cooks and so forth as well. They argue that the youth have the certain potential to be effective for their community, hence giving way to them and respecting their way of thinking. In a nutshell, from my point of view, which is the same as the second group, providing well-organized facilities for the students and givinge a free hand to them would benefit the whole society. The young individuals would be motivated to push the envelope in their life, if they choose their future path at their discretion.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Some People Think that all University Students Should Study Whatever They Like, Maryam Attar.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. A large number of school leavers tend to pursue their goals through tertiary education, which provides them with a vast range of field study choices. While some people argue that university students should be channeled into studying science and technology-related subjects, there are some, who are not on board with this mentality, and believe that we should give young members a free rein to follow their favorite fields. The first group, who does not agree with the autonomy of choosing the study field for university students, accepts that just scientific and technological issues can offer a wider scope of employability for the young individuals. Moreover, with the technology on the rise, there would be more positions for research proposed by the growing industries. For instance, a considerable number of parents force their adults to choose an engineering major or medical science, since they think these fields are accompanied by the higher social position, which they can be proud of. In addition, they assert their great income is another advantage which is worthy of consideration. On the other hand, the second group holds this opinion that from a the psychological point of view, students should have the freedom to opt for their favorite study subjects, and believe a prosperous society needs artists, athletes, cooks and so forth as well. They argue that the youth have the certain potential to be effective for their community, hence giving way to them and respecting their way of thinking. In a nutshell, from my point of view, which is the same as the second group, providing well-organized facilities for the students and givinge a free hand to them would benefit the whole society. The young individuals would be motivated to push the envelope in their life, if they choose their future path at their discretion.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Sportsmen's Salaries, Morteza 2016-12-16T16:14:43+00:00 2016-12-16T16:14:43+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1043-sportsmen-s-salaries-morteza <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Sportsmen's Salaries, Morteza.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. The reason why people’s incomes unbelievably excessively differ from those that of others in amount is not always the level of responsibility they’ve assumed, nor even the value do that they have provided the community with. Sportsmen [set, make] are good examples, in this regard, whose eligibility of a considerably higher salary compared to the people’s average has always been called into question by its critics. Sometimes injured and almost always in danger endangered, all athletes form a pyramid in which the base consists mostly of many who forever lead an ordinary life whether in the case of success which theirs are entirely negligible or when regarding fame, something they may suffer the lack of. At the pick, are only a few, small in population, but widely famous and immensely rich although excessively hard working and most importantly tolerant in any regard called the professional. The average salary the whole pyramid receives in the relatively short career carrier of the consisting members must not be even comparable to that of well-paid-job holders, but with a different triangular-shape distribution whose base, this time, is allocated to those at the peak pick of the pyramid. Before complaining about their so-called high salary people must see the all days of hard work, hear the mighty screams of pain due to injury and suffer the pressure of media publicizing the simplest and smallest mistakes and attend the community not the private and safe one (which) they are used to but where no privacy is respected. Unfairness, here, is not the issue of how and why they earn much. Instead, the unjustness (that) there is, is in the talent and gifts different sportsmen have. Such an unjustness dates back to the days of slavery when many fought to the death to lead to only one’s survival and freedom. To those who may believe that the amount people earn must be in accordance with what they do, I may argue that no one seemingly can evaluate what people do for society. Bringing joy and entertainment to the fans of all generations by letting their dreams to come true, athletes play an irreplaceable role in making the world a better place to live in. Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Followed from the above, since hardly would a widely-accepted method be able to evaluate the outcome of different professions, I believe that we should not disturb/disrupt/prevent a naturally-formed balance between jobs of different kinds and, sometimes, not clear reasons for which their holders deserve an extravagant salary life, a balance which, I must admit, to many is highly vulnerable and temporary since it is unfair.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Sportsmen's Salaries, Morteza.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. The reason why people’s incomes unbelievably excessively differ from those that of others in amount is not always the level of responsibility they’ve assumed, nor even the value do that they have provided the community with. Sportsmen [set, make] are good examples, in this regard, whose eligibility of a considerably higher salary compared to the people’s average has always been called into question by its critics. Sometimes injured and almost always in danger endangered, all athletes form a pyramid in which the base consists mostly of many who forever lead an ordinary life whether in the case of success which theirs are entirely negligible or when regarding fame, something they may suffer the lack of. At the pick, are only a few, small in population, but widely famous and immensely rich although excessively hard working and most importantly tolerant in any regard called the professional. The average salary the whole pyramid receives in the relatively short career carrier of the consisting members must not be even comparable to that of well-paid-job holders, but with a different triangular-shape distribution whose base, this time, is allocated to those at the peak pick of the pyramid. Before complaining about their so-called high salary people must see the all days of hard work, hear the mighty screams of pain due to injury and suffer the pressure of media publicizing the simplest and smallest mistakes and attend the community not the private and safe one (which) they are used to but where no privacy is respected. Unfairness, here, is not the issue of how and why they earn much. Instead, the unjustness (that) there is, is in the talent and gifts different sportsmen have. Such an unjustness dates back to the days of slavery when many fought to the death to lead to only one’s survival and freedom. To those who may believe that the amount people earn must be in accordance with what they do, I may argue that no one seemingly can evaluate what people do for society. Bringing joy and entertainment to the fans of all generations by letting their dreams to come true, athletes play an irreplaceable role in making the world a better place to live in. Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Followed from the above, since hardly would a widely-accepted method be able to evaluate the outcome of different professions, I believe that we should not disturb/disrupt/prevent a naturally-formed balance between jobs of different kinds and, sometimes, not clear reasons for which their holders deserve an extravagant salary life, a balance which, I must admit, to many is highly vulnerable and temporary since it is unfair.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Talented or Not, Saeed Shokravi 2016-12-16T16:14:19+00:00 2016-12-16T16:14:19+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1042-talented-or-not-saeed-shokravi <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Talented or Not, Saeed Shokravi.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Page 102 of Saadaat Jozveh: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is absolutely a marvelous phenomenon that God god has given us highly distinctive aptitudes from the first day we were born. As a result, our first major duty during life is to get acquainted with our unique abilities and then to put all our efforts into enriching our capabilities by being enough perseverant enough. A majority of people maintain/hold/argue have faith in that exceptional talents promotes success and welfare in advance. For instance, “nowadays teenage singers whom are having enormous amounts of income can be found almost everywhere,. moreover, they live their lives in an exotic atmosphere of having tremendous numbers of fans” which is what these people might say. Another belief they have may be, not only did most of them have no tutors to help them attain this point, but also they have genuine talents which leads them to be other artists’ trainers as well. On the contrary, there are those whom are having reservations about the idea of “being brilliant without being taught”. They believe the more a person tries, the more he or she acquires. To put it simply into simple words, is it possible for a hardworking student to fail all the exams? Sub consequently, people’s achievements are always being denoted by both their persistence and knowledge simultaneously by this group. To me, we were all born with numerous exclusive gifts undoubtedly which undoubtedly makes us unique. While having all kinds of different tastes, we should support each other in order to prevail over difficulties. By the same token, all the human beings should try to do their best in order to find their fields of interest. Not all of us are capable of doing this, nevertheless. You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course. You are writing a letter to your tutor.  Apologise for the delay  Explain why it is late  Request an extension Dear Professor Akbar Akbarzadeh, Please accept my sincere apologies for not doing my Etabs project. I am extremely sorry for not meeting the deadline you set and I am aware of that this delay will cause you a lot of inconvenience. Unfortunately, I had a domestic problem to deal with. My father had a heart attack last week and he is currently recovering at home and I need to look after him. In view of this, I would be very grateful if you could give me another week to have this crucial project completed. I need this time so that I can proofread my project and check my references. I also need to write my conclusion but as I have already managed to prepare the outline of the summary it should not be time consuming. Once again, I am truly sorry about this extremely unfortunate delay. I am the one to blame. But it was not intentional at all. Yours faithfully, Saeed Shokravi</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Talented or Not, Saeed Shokravi.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Page 102 of Saadaat Jozveh: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is absolutely a marvelous phenomenon that God god has given us highly distinctive aptitudes from the first day we were born. As a result, our first major duty during life is to get acquainted with our unique abilities and then to put all our efforts into enriching our capabilities by being enough perseverant enough. A majority of people maintain/hold/argue have faith in that exceptional talents promotes success and welfare in advance. For instance, “nowadays teenage singers whom are having enormous amounts of income can be found almost everywhere,. moreover, they live their lives in an exotic atmosphere of having tremendous numbers of fans” which is what these people might say. Another belief they have may be, not only did most of them have no tutors to help them attain this point, but also they have genuine talents which leads them to be other artists’ trainers as well. On the contrary, there are those whom are having reservations about the idea of “being brilliant without being taught”. They believe the more a person tries, the more he or she acquires. To put it simply into simple words, is it possible for a hardworking student to fail all the exams? Sub consequently, people’s achievements are always being denoted by both their persistence and knowledge simultaneously by this group. To me, we were all born with numerous exclusive gifts undoubtedly which undoubtedly makes us unique. While having all kinds of different tastes, we should support each other in order to prevail over difficulties. By the same token, all the human beings should try to do their best in order to find their fields of interest. Not all of us are capable of doing this, nevertheless. You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course. You are writing a letter to your tutor.  Apologise for the delay  Explain why it is late  Request an extension Dear Professor Akbar Akbarzadeh, Please accept my sincere apologies for not doing my Etabs project. I am extremely sorry for not meeting the deadline you set and I am aware of that this delay will cause you a lot of inconvenience. Unfortunately, I had a domestic problem to deal with. My father had a heart attack last week and he is currently recovering at home and I need to look after him. In view of this, I would be very grateful if you could give me another week to have this crucial project completed. I need this time so that I can proofread my project and check my references. I also need to write my conclusion but as I have already managed to prepare the outline of the summary it should not be time consuming. Once again, I am truly sorry about this extremely unfortunate delay. I am the one to blame. But it was not intentional at all. Yours faithfully, Saeed Shokravi</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Technology and Creativity, Kiarash 2016-12-16T16:13:52+00:00 2016-12-16T16:13:52+00:00 https://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/185-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-26/1041-technology-and-creativity-kiarash <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Technology and Creativity, Kiarash.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that leading-edge technology can help juveniles to be more intelligent and novel. Contrary, to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that technology such as smart cell phones distracts students from lessons and takes imposes off thinking away from to them. I, to a great extent, disagree with the idea that new technology devastatesd the novelty and creativity of children. First and foremost, the technology is an amazing way was to facilitate the way of living whether for adults or adolescents. This extraordinary phenomenon bridgesing the gap between the comprehension of the ideas and unknown fields because/since . Forasmuch as, children want to be more up-to-date and more of a genius they use technology as a way to improve their ability, knowledge, and understanding to tackle the problems. Afterward, their matured savvies lead them to be more inevitable. Another significant fact which should be taken into consideration is that almost all of the universities and education systems use the technology in academic levels, for instance not all the schools are not posting the lectures and assignments on the internet and a disciple has to have an opportunity to use them, so it ridiculous to call technology detrimental for the youth. An important issue is that a pupil can find the solution to of his assignments and use it them as an incentive and motive to be fructify the new thought and resolves new issues. Finally, it is recently indicated by researches, the new ideas in comparison with the old ones are more lucrative and luminary due to initiatives in this era which have evolveds because of the new inventions which ease people's life. Therefore, an individual's passion to be more creative and ambitious paves the way for being more vanguard by using technology as a best option. It is rational because the people bring innovative ideas and the new patents are increasingly being have been boosted. On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convincedvced that the technology is a phenomenon/thing/something stuff which helps juniors to be more up-to-date and prosperous. The usage of technology is inevitable uniententionally and helps students and scientists to achieve acheive their productivity. The studies have shown stipulated that technology helps people to be more creative.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Fridays/1395/Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.26/Technology and Creativity, Kiarash.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that leading-edge technology can help juveniles to be more intelligent and novel. Contrary, to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that technology such as smart cell phones distracts students from lessons and takes imposes off thinking away from to them. I, to a great extent, disagree with the idea that new technology devastatesd the novelty and creativity of children. First and foremost, the technology is an amazing way was to facilitate the way of living whether for adults or adolescents. This extraordinary phenomenon bridgesing the gap between the comprehension of the ideas and unknown fields because/since . Forasmuch as, children want to be more up-to-date and more of a genius they use technology as a way to improve their ability, knowledge, and understanding to tackle the problems. Afterward, their matured savvies lead them to be more inevitable. Another significant fact which should be taken into consideration is that almost all of the universities and education systems use the technology in academic levels, for instance not all the schools are not posting the lectures and assignments on the internet and a disciple has to have an opportunity to use them, so it ridiculous to call technology detrimental for the youth. An important issue is that a pupil can find the solution to of his assignments and use it them as an incentive and motive to be fructify the new thought and resolves new issues. Finally, it is recently indicated by researches, the new ideas in comparison with the old ones are more lucrative and luminary due to initiatives in this era which have evolveds because of the new inventions which ease people's life. Therefore, an individual's passion to be more creative and ambitious paves the way for being more vanguard by using technology as a best option. It is rational because the people bring innovative ideas and the new patents are increasingly being have been boosted. On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convincedvced that the technology is a phenomenon/thing/something stuff which helps juniors to be more up-to-date and prosperous. The usage of technology is inevitable uniententionally and helps students and scientists to achieve acheive their productivity. The studies have shown stipulated that technology helps people to be more creative.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table>