Essays

Home schooling, Golpar

2015-10-03T09:14:25+00:00

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Is it better to educate children at home rather than school or not? At what extentd do you agree or disagree It is not a long time since modern families have s started educating their kids at home although, this is not a new practice and has d been practiced/done by farmers and villagers since from a long time ago. Many years later, children were accustomed to being taught at home and learning everything from their parents. In that time because of the large number of kids in families plus the distance of the houses, they were obliged to stay in their home for education. Besides, children did help their parents with in daily chores and farming events. Therefore, it was both logical and sensible for family units not to be fascinated by to sending children to the schools. In this day time and age, the supporters of this idea assert this type of education is still moral for a couple of reasons. The idea is supported via controlled and supervised teaching in purpose to train whatever they think is suitable for their children. First, "many of the topics which are taught at schools are useless and a waste of time", they maintain. Secondly, there will be no concern about learning negative behavior from other students. And the last but not least, the risk of contagious disease will be far more less. In contrast to this statement, I believe it is crucial for children to be raised in social environments, and schools are the best places for achieving aiming this purpose. As humans are created communal, our brood needs to be in relation to each other. Besides, the learning process will be more effective when it is carried y out in group as competition will be a great motivator for them. In fact, education is not the only purpose of going to schools. The more do they interact, the better they can handle their problems in their future social life. Moreover, they will become more independent after growing up. In summary, I would like to say the advantages of social education outweigh overweigh the disadvantages. However, reasonable monitoring of our child must be considered in order to prevent the unhelpful effects of bad manners which might be one of the negative outcomes of the public schooling. Golpar. Z

Advertisement effect, Dariush

2015-10-03T10:39:22+00:00

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? In recent decades development of technology has been invaded all aspects of our life .it is inescapable that our life is being influenced by technology, but we should concentrate on the changes that technologicaly developments will be leaded to. There are lot of food products commodities which are considered as staple diet and need to be afforded every day, Consequently we must keep the same pace with this phenomenon and adapt our life accordingly. Every day you may face a lot of advertisement that is stuck to stick in your car , your house's bell and your windows, at a glance it seems that they are disruptive and cause a lot of problems for citizens ,but in my opinion the advantages is outweigh of the disadvantages. My point of view is that it is undeniable that modern civilization needs modern life style. for instance; one day you are going to order the launch , by considering the amounts of advertisement ,you have a lot of choices,. However, the quality still is considered as a crucial trait of each case . it would be a smart subtle idea if you can select the best staff (stuff) goods among throughout the sales blurbs and apply and amend your life style respectively . Albeit despite the mentioned advantages of the advertisement in our society , there it must be limitation and supervision for the companies to prevent them from devoting an exorbitant fund and energy to persuade the people with their fake photos. the government should play a vital role in this regard which will contribute be contributed to safer competition among the companies by setting some applicable and prohibiting rules . To conclude , by considering the variation of advertisements and competition among companies people should not take a momentary actions and must consider all aspects of their necessity, and in other words, we should not let the advertisement mold our selection.

Advertisement, Maryam

2015-10-03T09:10:45+00:00

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Advantages and disadvantages of advertisement: Advertisement is the presentation of a product by means of a number of mediums/media such as television, radio, magazines, internet and many other ways. This thriving business can benefit both customers and producers, whereas it contains some drawbacks. If you are seeking a product, you want to know the most information possible about it, namely all properties, pros and cons and prices of each kinds of product. Advertisement helps you reach your objective. Companies use Advertising advertising as a means to introduce their products, cutting‐edge newfangled inventions in particular, and improve their sale, and then the increased amount number of production contributes to reduction in per unit cost of manufacture. Moreover, advertisement provides companies with the opportunity of presenting their products to overseas costumers. Therefore, it benefits the producer and subsequently prospers helps the whole business prosper in general subsequently. On the other hand, advertisements have some negative effects on people's consuming methods. It may prompt individuals to buy the product that is not a necessity or even a priority for the family. Purchasing luxuries contributes to imposing financial pressure on families. This situation is the result of commercial'ss' exaggerationng in the influence of the product on ,namely, the convenience of living. We are constantly bombarded with the advertisements. Therefore, we might be influenced unconsciously, and consumerism emerges is emerged. Despite having financial problems, we tend to buy luxury items and clothes according to the latest fashion and buy luxuries. All in all, while having some disadvantages, advertisement is an effective medium in on the producer‐consumer relationship. The consumer could be aware of all information about the objective product, and the company can launch may reach it the market as soon as possible. (The higher the amount of production, the lower the cost of production per unit .) Maryam

Advertising_Hedieh

2015-10-03T11:17:26+00:00

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Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Advertising is a branch of marketing with communicating to customers about products, brands and services which plays a key role in to persuading persuade people into purchasing a particular good or service. Due to widespread utilization utilize of Aadvertisement in business, it that is regarded as an industry which may have some pros and cons in our life. I tend towards the viewpoint that by producing new products in this changeable world which affected the treatments of consumers, advertisement can help people have freedom and information to choose their requirements among the variety of goods. In this rapidly changing world, Advertising educates consumers about new products that can help them to improve their lives. Not only does it increases the sales which renders the development in economy but also companies produce commodities/goods /things in lower cost to triumph against advertising invasions that surrounded individuals. In addition, without advertising some free radio and TV‐channels wouldn't be able to exist and afford their responsibilities. Ticket prices in either sporting events or cinema would be lower than that of the real world so it that can have a major contribution to providing the entertainment of society. Besides the major benefits of advertising it can have some detrimental influences on society. It is taking people away from reality. The brilliance of new products urges people to buy unnecessarily which leads … get them into debt. Moreover, attractive announcements only show one side, the best side of product, and simply hide the negative aspects. For example advertising cigarettes or alcoholic drinks appeals immature youth to use these unhealthy products. Despite these negative (not dangerous) influences on our daily life there are lots of positive and mentionable effects on society. Without recognition of products, we feel a sense of loss lost among various and plenty of goods that advertisement can be a key that opens opening our mind to anything new.

Ahmad Student Behavior Problems

2015-10-03T09:11:17+00:00

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student's behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Without any question, the misbehavior of students in schools has been a serious challenge in many parts of the world. lack of knowledge in parenting, training teachers and lack of culture in societies results in problems in schools. To begin with, many societies suffer from their poor cultural manners. Children learn from one another easily at school and by that, behaviors change and students are likely to misbehave. Another reason, which is common, is the teachers who tackle with it directly. Not being well trained as a tutor leads to a circumstance in which not only does damages the students, but also the teachers as well. An unprofessional reaction in a situation is predicted to worsen it. Therefore, students are the ones who will be at a loss/will be adversely affected (do not benefit). But the main reason would be the upbringing of a child. Raising a kid leaves no question in his/her manner in the society at large. The very reason, which scientists have also confirmed to be true, is the parenting that covers the two other reasons. Hence, it results in damaging consequences at schools. Scientists have announced some solutions as the very primary requirements from the early ages. We must provide Providing technical training classes detailed on parenting in addition to those of the teachers. All in all, many problems as mentioned above on parenting and also teaching are projected to be simply removed by prohibiting them.

Ali, Gender difference

2015-10-03T10:22:13+00:00

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? This is an undeniable fact that women and men have many differences due to their biological characteristics and social roles for which they have been preparing since childhood to act on. Therefore, these differences results in different skills and abilities in them which may restrict them from undertaking certan /some kinds of occupations. Most conservative thinkers approve of gender restiriction especially when it comes to professions and occupations. In fact they regard these restrictions as natural due to the fact that gender differences are biologic and consequently natural as well. However, more liberal positions in this debate maintain that because of the general human right to choose one's lifestyle freely, all human beings, regardless of their gender, have this right to choose their favorite profession. I strictly believe that the right position in this dispute is placed somewhere at the middle of these two eextremes. On one hand, the problem with conservative belief, as the liberal pole rightly asserts, is that obligatory exclusion of people from specific jobs due to their gender is obviously opposing sing the human rights. Furthermore, it gender segregation is too far from the requirements of modern civilization and capitalist form of economic production because the demand for professional labour force has been enormously increased since almost 200 years ago. Hence, states and economic organisationsorganizations cannot not simply neglect the huge amount of human force in female population remaining out of the labour market. Moreover, we should not forget that in case of emphasizing gender differences, usually these are women that get deprived from their true rights discriminatively. On the other hand, the liberal position cannot not simply deny some definite biological facts. Women are mostly not physically suitable for those occupations which require a considerable degree of physical strength. But there are many other professions which women can take part in if the state, their families and other social institutions empower them. These are jobs and professions which women have been restricted to get in only as a result of false ideological beliefs and misjudgments. Sometimes the conservative parties and institutions deliberately mislead the society due to some objective benefits. Finally, it can be said that far from neglecting objective facts, women are an oppressed group of most societies who which need to be empowered

Alireza Fewer Languages

2015-10-03T09:11:47+00:00

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Alireza writing ielts task2 Every year several languages die out . some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Over several thousand years many languages appeared in al over the world .However, some of these new languages have disappeared .Some people believe that if the variety of languages is reduced ,living will be more convenient/easier than ever/before. In my opinion, on the negative side of this view nations will continuously lose their culture diversity,because cultures are highlyextremely connected with languages .for instance ,many books or poems which were written by their authors will not be useful .The solution of this problem might be a translation from one language to another one.in to some extent this solution will be useful . On the other hand, translating from one language to another one may cause reduction in content of the text .As a result, disappearance of dying out of languages may cause extinction dying out of many literature books as well. On the positive side of this reduction ,it is obvious that everyone in all over the world can communicate with more people from another nations .Furthermore, people who travel travelling to other countries can talk and give their opinion much easier .And so one major problem of travel to the other countries will be eliminated .Moreover, decreasing the number of languages may leads to production of more movies or music .since ,there are more people who can understand these products ,so this industry will be more profitable . In short ,the reason that I am agree with this opinion is that people can communicate and share their ideas with others much easier than before ,consequently education and business will be much faster than before .

Alireza, Technology Monitoring People

2015-10-03T10:22:46+00:00

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? There is no room for doubt that with an by increase ing in the number of devices which were devised recently. Many of them are is used for controlling people in order to find out what they do or say. Such practices So ithave has a plenty of positive and negative outcomes. There are many reasons that lie in this fact that controlling people's activities is necessary. For instance, nowadays many countries face with threats such as terrorism or vandalism in public areas, so one way that might prevent this threat is listening to calls which are contains discussions about these activities. What is more, monitoring is a convenient way for controlling huge and crowded public areas such as shopping malls and offices as well. Moreover, these cameras have helped police indicate identify robbers in case of bank robberies y. As a result, not only can do these technologies can make life live more and more safe but also they makes it more convenient. On the other hand, if we watch or listen to people especially when they are unaware, it makes them feeling as if of that someone entered their private life ve,. Consequently, it makes them annoyed, so it is better that everyone is warned when they enter in public areas which are controleds with cameras. Given that controlling calls helps police find suspects who which planning for illegal activities, it may happen for people who talk about something that is private, so securities should be aware that they are do not listening to this these calls. byWith considering all aspects of this monitoring, I am in favor of this approach/practice work because it makes our society safe.However, it has some drawbacks backs, so not so everyone should not be allowed to do these controllings.

Alireza, university students should study whatever they like

2015-10-03T10:23:20+00:00

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like .others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future ,such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. A lot of people share this view that students should not study courses that they are not interested in on them .While others say that courses which are helpful for their future must be obligatory. On the one side ,students are not attracted by their courses ,unless they are interesting .So it is difficult for them to follow their studies when they do not like them .This means that they would lose their enthusiasm for on studying .And so ,they might not get appropriate results .Moreover ,if we let them to choose what they are interested in ,not only do they do their assignment, but also they do some extra activities y as well .Besides ,they can select their future occupation more and more easily er than it used to be . On the other hand , an efficient education system in universities with fixed mandatory courses can be useful , because this can be more helpful for future of society .What is more ,it can makes students who are indolent study more .Furthermore ,they will be ready for jobs that our country will need .But ,if students choose on their own ,they may choose some popular subjects among all available .As a results ,others will be unselected even if our industry and society might need them .so there will a crucial shortage in several fields when this happen . Personally, I believe that both views are correct and it depends on the context. So universities must have several compulsory subjects and some optional ones as well. The last point that I want to mention is that universities can guide pupils to choose their subjects by on their own because this would help them to learn skills which are more suitable for them.

Alternative energy sources, Peyman

2015-10-03T11:17:02+00:00

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Nowadays there is a trend of rapid increase in already excessive use of natural resources such as oil, forest and fresh water. What dangers does it bring? What are the possible solutions to address these issues? In recent years the scale of using energy has significantly grown and what is important is that natural resources like oil, forest and water are used up at an astonishing rate. remarkably were used. It seems we must be well aware of the consequence of such use. There are numerous global issues such as poverty, war, and earthquake as well as using natural resources. The latter is absolutely crucial due to its consequences. For instance, forests are the biggest natural resource and a wide range of animals are living there. Logging, however, has damaged kilometers of forests a huge kilometers of forest and not only does were a number of animals were killed, and diapered but also it has had an enormous effect on the atmosphere. Furthermore, according to the weather forecasts, the earth temperature of earth has have been rising warming every year. With safer and endless alternative safer and endless energy sources such as wind and solar ones we can save oil and water. In addition, next generation needs a clean environment and natural energy, thus investment in on unlimited energy is a global issue rather than national ones. For instance Africa and Canada have wider deserts and windy cities respectively. Also with technical equipments which can convert such energy to useable ones we can keep other resources. Moreover, according to evidence time is ticking away for our planet because of drought. The level of water in 2015 was less thanthat ever across the world and in some countries like India and Iraq more than ten million of people died as a result of drought. were died. To sum some up, when it comes to global issues every country should be willing to cooperate and helps to keep earth clean.