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"Nowadays children as young as ten are committing terrible crimes such s murder and rape. If children commit such crimes age is no excuse and they should be sent to prison for the rest of their lives. Do you agree?" Decreasing the age of committing crimes is a new phenomenon which governments are faced with to them in developing countries. In the past criminals who killed a person were sent to a jail for the rest of their lives, but for children who commit murder it seems not to be fair. Although, Although the age is not an excuse for happening such terrible crimes happening, it is important to find the a main reason that makes a child as a murderer or a rapist / raper. Sociologists believe that family and society are the main ones responsible for making children commit crimes and it is necessary to help these kinds of families train their children not to go in the wrong way o in a wrong way. In these families parents are usually addicted and do not spend time for their children and instead, they use their children for making money, so . So by the solution that sociologists give to governments, they not only do help the family escape the cycle circle of crime, but also they decrease the number of crimes which children commit. In spite of all that, if a child commits a crime, we should face him by law low but it is not acceptable legal to send him to a prison where which all kinds of criminals exist in it. In my opinion, it is essential for governments to have a special jail for children where they can teach them to work and live without crimes and prepare them for their rest of their lives. Also, governments can give them a vocation in which case which in this case, these children not only do work and earn money for their lives, but also they feel useful for their society.s

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