Mondays GMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم تلفن: 42-88679341 http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/475-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-12-19 2024-05-04T23:52:38+00:00 IELTSTOEFLCENTER info@ieltstoeflcenter.com Joomla! - Open Source Content Management Amirreza, Living in Foreign 2020-03-09T18:19:53+00:00 2020-03-09T18:19:53+00:00 http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/475-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-12-19/3433-amirreza-living-in-foreign Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Amirreza, Living in Foreign.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">there is some doubt as to whether people who living in a country with a different language have some difficulties such as serious problems in the new society in it. However, in my opinion those people have lots of problems especially in social ones. To begin with, communication is the most important of humankind’s needs. People who have to live in other countries cannot communicate well due to lack of their skill to speak in a language of the destination’s country. Therefore, they become isolated and face lots of social problems. For instance, a person who wants/seeks to work or study in England should acquire English well while in many cases they do not have enough time/despite their time constraints. So he/she could not speak with people when arrive arriving in England. Plus, maybe people bother her/his him because of her/his color or language. So in most of the cases immigrants prefer to not to communicate with others. After a while they face serious problems such as depression. Nowadays, people who immigrate to a country which has different people and languages usually complain about its racial racist citizens. Although it is true that we are living in the 21st century, the world still has many racists. Immigrants cannot be comfortable when they go out so they prefer to appear in society. For example, news broadcasted recently about 3 English man men who attacked a Chinese because they thought the coronavirus just started in London because of those people. To make a long story short, I think immigrants deal with a lot pf of problems and one of themone of which is preventing avoiding being in society.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Amirreza, Living in Foreign.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">there is some doubt as to whether people who living in a country with a different language have some difficulties such as serious problems in the new society in it. However, in my opinion those people have lots of problems especially in social ones. To begin with, communication is the most important of humankind’s needs. People who have to live in other countries cannot communicate well due to lack of their skill to speak in a language of the destination’s country. Therefore, they become isolated and face lots of social problems. For instance, a person who wants/seeks to work or study in England should acquire English well while in many cases they do not have enough time/despite their time constraints. So he/she could not speak with people when arrive arriving in England. Plus, maybe people bother her/his him because of her/his color or language. So in most of the cases immigrants prefer to not to communicate with others. After a while they face serious problems such as depression. Nowadays, people who immigrate to a country which has different people and languages usually complain about its racial racist citizens. Although it is true that we are living in the 21st century, the world still has many racists. Immigrants cannot be comfortable when they go out so they prefer to appear in society. For example, news broadcasted recently about 3 English man men who attacked a Chinese because they thought the coronavirus just started in London because of those people. To make a long story short, I think immigrants deal with a lot pf of problems and one of themone of which is preventing avoiding being in society.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Mohammad, International Aid 2020-03-09T18:19:40+00:00 2020-03-09T18:19:40+00:00 http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/475-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-12-19/3432-mohammad-international-aid Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Mohammad, International Aid.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it unnecessary because money is misspent by the government that receives it. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion. Nowadays, due to globalization, challenges mainly extend beyond national borders which necessitates cooperation among countries to solve joint problems. This, alongside other reasons, has given rise to international aid directed from rich nations to the less fortunate ones. In spite of the evident benefits for both sides, the way in which such help should be provided so that people directly benefit from it is still in dispute. Thanks to advances in technology and transportation, internal frontiers are technically diminishing. National problems which once weakened a country in favor of its prospective enemies in the same region are now a threat to all. An outbreak of viral diseases, economic recession, or political instability can cross borders between countries and even continents instantaneously and become a global issue. Moreover, the humanitarianism may be the actual reasons. Despite lacking an agreed definition, the ethics cross cultures, religions and history, which makes humanitarian principles a universal language. As humans, we need to help our kinds in order to be grateful to what we have been given. In the words of Paul Newman, we should acknowledge luck, the benevolence of it in my our life, and the brutality of it in the lives of others. However, the money cannot be considered well-spent if it is given to the government of the recipient country. In many cases the government is packed with corrupt politicians, or run by a tyrant who puts histheir needs above their nation, reaching their hands avariciously out for the money offered. Thus the charity could fuel the corruption in those countries, adding to the victims’ misery, hence the importance of opening other channels rather than the government. One proposed option would be establishing or using third parties like non-governmental organizations (NGOs) or educational institutions to provide goods and services directly to for the citizens of the country who make decisions and actions only in service of putting the people out of misery. For instance, helping train police, who are selected after a background investigation to ensure that the trainees are not corrupt or vulnerable to blackmail can be a huge step towards reducing crime which obviously can bring about other benefits. In conclusion, while foreign aids provided by richer and more developed countries can save a nation and alleviate their sufferings, the way in which these contributions are made should be double checked in order to prevent any more possible corruption or mitigating mitigate the present problems.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Mohammad, International Aid.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it unnecessary because money is misspent by the government that receives it. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion. Nowadays, due to globalization, challenges mainly extend beyond national borders which necessitates cooperation among countries to solve joint problems. This, alongside other reasons, has given rise to international aid directed from rich nations to the less fortunate ones. In spite of the evident benefits for both sides, the way in which such help should be provided so that people directly benefit from it is still in dispute. Thanks to advances in technology and transportation, internal frontiers are technically diminishing. National problems which once weakened a country in favor of its prospective enemies in the same region are now a threat to all. An outbreak of viral diseases, economic recession, or political instability can cross borders between countries and even continents instantaneously and become a global issue. Moreover, the humanitarianism may be the actual reasons. Despite lacking an agreed definition, the ethics cross cultures, religions and history, which makes humanitarian principles a universal language. As humans, we need to help our kinds in order to be grateful to what we have been given. In the words of Paul Newman, we should acknowledge luck, the benevolence of it in my our life, and the brutality of it in the lives of others. However, the money cannot be considered well-spent if it is given to the government of the recipient country. In many cases the government is packed with corrupt politicians, or run by a tyrant who puts histheir needs above their nation, reaching their hands avariciously out for the money offered. Thus the charity could fuel the corruption in those countries, adding to the victims’ misery, hence the importance of opening other channels rather than the government. One proposed option would be establishing or using third parties like non-governmental organizations (NGOs) or educational institutions to provide goods and services directly to for the citizens of the country who make decisions and actions only in service of putting the people out of misery. For instance, helping train police, who are selected after a background investigation to ensure that the trainees are not corrupt or vulnerable to blackmail can be a huge step towards reducing crime which obviously can bring about other benefits. In conclusion, while foreign aids provided by richer and more developed countries can save a nation and alleviate their sufferings, the way in which these contributions are made should be double checked in order to prevent any more possible corruption or mitigating mitigate the present problems.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Nasrin, Working Long Hours 2020-03-09T18:19:28+00:00 2020-03-09T18:19:28+00:00 http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/475-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-12-19/3431-nasrin-working-long-hours Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Nasrin, Working Long Hours.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Many people are working long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? In modern societies, individuals spend most of their time at the workplace without indulging themselves. I would argue that this trend's drawbacks far outweigh its benefits. Living in capitalistic societies, people mostly toil from dawn to dusk to earn money which assures that they are them being able to make their ends meet. Money brings power and safety, hence the importance of having adequate amount of it for a rainy day. Not only can an employee make more money by working overtimes, but also he can thrive on his job. They can leave a profound impression on the employers, thereby enhancing their job security and reputation as a dedicated employee. Apart from the aforementioned merits of working long hours, it will cause many problems for individuals. Firstly, it will pale the family bonds as a result of lack of sharing experiences. That the quality time which family members spend together makes them more related and connected is an undeniable fact. These close-knit relationships have a great impact on a person's mental wellbeing. Secondly, those who dedicate themselves only to their work deprive themselves from of finding their favorite hobbies, so they cannot strike a balance between their work life and their personal life. Finally, working long hours leaves no time for exercising which is of paramount significance for a person's health. In addition to being fit and gaining physical health, it helps people to put their minds at ease and release their stress. In conclusion, although with the aid of working overtime people can improve their financial situation, I do believe that it would negatively impact their well-being.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Nasrin, Working Long Hours.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Many people are working long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? In modern societies, individuals spend most of their time at the workplace without indulging themselves. I would argue that this trend's drawbacks far outweigh its benefits. Living in capitalistic societies, people mostly toil from dawn to dusk to earn money which assures that they are them being able to make their ends meet. Money brings power and safety, hence the importance of having adequate amount of it for a rainy day. Not only can an employee make more money by working overtimes, but also he can thrive on his job. They can leave a profound impression on the employers, thereby enhancing their job security and reputation as a dedicated employee. Apart from the aforementioned merits of working long hours, it will cause many problems for individuals. Firstly, it will pale the family bonds as a result of lack of sharing experiences. That the quality time which family members spend together makes them more related and connected is an undeniable fact. These close-knit relationships have a great impact on a person's mental wellbeing. Secondly, those who dedicate themselves only to their work deprive themselves from of finding their favorite hobbies, so they cannot strike a balance between their work life and their personal life. Finally, working long hours leaves no time for exercising which is of paramount significance for a person's health. In addition to being fit and gaining physical health, it helps people to put their minds at ease and release their stress. In conclusion, although with the aid of working overtime people can improve their financial situation, I do believe that it would negatively impact their well-being.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Zakariaee, Student Watch TV 2020-03-09T18:19:12+00:00 2020-03-09T18:19:12+00:00 http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/475-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-12-19/3430-zakariaee-student-watch-tv Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Zakariaee, Student Watch TV.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">The average British child, between the age of 4 and 15, watches more than 20 hours of television a week. Studies show she/he only spends aboutv7 hours per week on physical exercise. How does this compare with the situation in your country? How can parents make sure children get enough exercise? Give reason for your answer Watching television and playing with video game areis very/extremely amazing especially for adolescents’ more than physical activities. It has bad effects especially for their health. I do not have not the exact figures regarding to compare comparing the time that children assign for watching T.V or physical activities in my hometown but it Iranian children have to cope with that problem as the same as Britain British children. Nowadays, lifestyles have changed by media and watching T.V is one of the most popular entertainments for children and they have gravity toward watching cartoons and following their heroes in on television for instances Batman and Ben10 for boys or Anastasia for girls. It seems they were are fascinated by T.V and they like to consume most of their time in watching T.V. Furthermore, in many of families both of the parents are engaged with full time works and they have not enough time to assign for physical activities of their children. They presumed that children in their schools or kindergartens have sufficient physical activities, though, that time was not enough for them. In addition most of the families live in apartments and the children don’t do not have a large area for playing with their siblings. The Common side effects of the less activities activity include children’s overweight and health problems for them. It is necessary for parents to assign more time for children’s physical activities and confine the time that they watching T.V. In my opinion, sending kids to sports clubs, playing in playgrounds are the easiest solutions for increase increasing their physical activities of children. Moreover, parents can using use new devices in video game consoles as likesuch as cameras for PlayStation or Kinect for Xbox that cause physical activities in home. This These new devices are as popular as watching T.V for adolescents and increase their activities.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.12.19/Zakariaee, Student Watch TV.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">The average British child, between the age of 4 and 15, watches more than 20 hours of television a week. Studies show she/he only spends aboutv7 hours per week on physical exercise. How does this compare with the situation in your country? How can parents make sure children get enough exercise? Give reason for your answer Watching television and playing with video game areis very/extremely amazing especially for adolescents’ more than physical activities. It has bad effects especially for their health. I do not have not the exact figures regarding to compare comparing the time that children assign for watching T.V or physical activities in my hometown but it Iranian children have to cope with that problem as the same as Britain British children. Nowadays, lifestyles have changed by media and watching T.V is one of the most popular entertainments for children and they have gravity toward watching cartoons and following their heroes in on television for instances Batman and Ben10 for boys or Anastasia for girls. It seems they were are fascinated by T.V and they like to consume most of their time in watching T.V. Furthermore, in many of families both of the parents are engaged with full time works and they have not enough time to assign for physical activities of their children. They presumed that children in their schools or kindergartens have sufficient physical activities, though, that time was not enough for them. In addition most of the families live in apartments and the children don’t do not have a large area for playing with their siblings. The Common side effects of the less activities activity include children’s overweight and health problems for them. It is necessary for parents to assign more time for children’s physical activities and confine the time that they watching T.V. In my opinion, sending kids to sports clubs, playing in playgrounds are the easiest solutions for increase increasing their physical activities of children. Moreover, parents can using use new devices in video game consoles as likesuch as cameras for PlayStation or Kinect for Xbox that cause physical activities in home. This These new devices are as popular as watching T.V for adolescents and increase their activities.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table>