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The table shows clearly that the passenger dying rates by type of transport between 1981 and 1993 in the U.K. With a glance, it is immediately clear that motorBikers passengers had a the highest rates and air transport were the safest during the years. Despite of public awareness, the passer-by and bicycle had the second and third position in passengers’ death rate. Less than 4% for death rates were connected to the other people using ships and boats, trains, automobiles, vans and buses transportation, during the corresponding period. The death rate for car and van passengers’ dropped slightly. by contrast, the rates for coaches show some fluctuations. The Death rate for water transportation reached a peak in 1986 and hit a zero in 1987, this variation were was repeated for a couple another years. The pedal cycle rates dipped slightly, havingit had 25% of death rates, though. The Top death rate for motorcycle, bicycle and foot passengers, been is an alarm for their advocates especially sport men and women. Frequencies Frequent travelers, using flight and railway, can travel with peace full.

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Mona Doorsian Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. According to some people’s points of view all of the scientific research and papers should be shared at in the academic world in free, but the others think that people should only have access to worthy vital data. I believe that much more information can be caused more success. Some people claim that if they access to all research based information, they can be more successful. For example, you imagine a student who wants to work on her research project at school on human health and nutrition; she needs to read some observational, clinical, evidence based and even cohort studies to do her research project. So, if she accesses to all kinds of those papers and data then she can improve herself and maybe approach to new information. Therefore, in that way all of the students can benefit from each other’s findings without any restrictions. However, some other people mentioned that just some data which is really worth it should be shared freely. They think that some unnecessary information can confuse readers or researchers and mislead them in their way. For instance, when post graduate students try to work on their thesis project they only require significant and fundamental data. Thus, they can find their necessary papers quickly. Importantly, it can be useful for the target groups because most of them are students and try to save their money due to lack of enough budget. Thus, they can access to important information quickly and freely. In summary, on the basis of the points mentioned above, it would seem that both views have reasonable aspects and the outcomes will depend on a number of factors. I tend to consider that all of the papers and data should be freely accessible to all readers in order to improve themselves.

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views? The Education system is different in countries all around the world. Some of them advise that learning different subjects has many profits for children who are at an early age. Others believe that children do not have to attend school classes until the age of reason or over. This essay will discuss both of these views/either of these views. To begin with, some parents encourage their child to go nursery school to acquire knowledge which can contribute to achieve achieving some skills in some subjects that can be beneficial for their future life at an early age. Children in these schools can learn to count or even read letters through video games and play. Children are prepared with deeper perception of those subjects which will be present in the next years when the formal education starts. This will assist parents to in finding out in which subject their offspring have has difficulties. In fact, they can help their child in later years in their education. On the contrary, others are against the view which is mentioned above. Some people believe that children need to stay at home, play with their peers and enjoy their carefree days. They tend to educate some primary subjects to their child rather than sending them to school before the age 7. They sometimes give children false training because their information is out-dated and they increase dilemmasconfuse for their offspring. From my point of view, the advisable age for attending school is age six, one year before starting the formal education. The reason is/involves that children can be familiar with some basics through games before learning official subjects. The teachers and parents can determine their strengths and weaknesses for future years. Moreover, parents should ensure that their children are enrolled in the right school to improve their child’s development.

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? The importance of having the ability to present ourselves and our opinions in front of others is of paramount significance. There has been much discussion revolving around whether this should be a mandatory part of schools' curriculum or not. Since this capability has many advantages for pupils’ ’s future, it is better to learn it in school. The ability to speak in public is a skill which has a great impact on a people’s life. To start with, by presenting confidently people can demonstrate their knowledge to others and leave a profound impression on them. That those who can speak confidently in public and show their competencies to others will gain more attention in their professional life is an undeniable fact. That is to say, they stick to their managers’ mind and will get promoted more likely. Moreover, speaking is a means of communication which facilitates interacting with others and expanding individuals' social circle. Many a person suffers from the inability to overcome stress and speak in front of others, thereby being in solitude. The educating education system can provide an ideal opportunity for children to hone the skill of giving a speech to an audience. Children are less likely to be stressful in social situations since they are not that obsessive about other's others’ judgment. The lack of stress for speaking in front of others will help them to be more self-confident and overcome its difficulties. Giving lectures for example as a classroom assignment to other peers, students would learn how to control unwanted distractions and have self-control under pressure. I remember myself being painfully shy in at school and hesitate to utter words with everybody except my close friends and my family, and the first time I had to lecture in class was one of my worst nightmares but after two or three lectures times/practices/occasions I became accustomed to it. In conclusion, how to speak confidently in front of others is a must-learnt skill which will influence one’s person’s whole life. It is better to start the acquisition of it from schools since children can be master it more easily..

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. No one can ever deny an the efficient role of our jobs in our life. In fact I believe that every human is born for a specific career but nowadays living is harder than the past because for of a the tough economic conditions, so people cannot be sitting and waiting for their dreamy jobs. From my viewpoint people should get a secure job and whenever they have the opportunity to access their favorable jobs, they can go for it and I have a couple of reasons which I explain with some examples. The first and main reason which can be on the top and covers other reasons is "Money". Todays the world rotates by money talks, so you have to earn money because you must meet your basic needs such as food to not be starving, clothes to wear and a house to live in. In this case you must have a stable job with regular salary to be survive in the world. Imagine, you do not have a job, far from your family and you are waiting for your admirable jobs, in conclude conclusion/therefore you will be homeless or die. Secondly, having a secure job can be beneficial because you can learn a new thing and gain noteworthy experiences which also you can use them on in your pleasant jobs. For instance, when I was preparing for the bar examination, I worked at a notary office. It was not my fabulous favorite job but it was extremely helpful. I learned how to distinguish between illegal speculation documents and embezzlement deeds. Last but not least, by secure jobs people can achieve a notable resume which might aid them in their favorite jobs. In some cases people are educated in their desirable majors and they look for a related job but because they do not have enough an impressive resume and background, companies hire a person who more experts, so they must have adequate resume. Ultimately, although individuals are deserving deserve to have superior and satisfactory jobs, in this recent decades they must work hard and earn more money to have comfortable life because in this situation peace and money are more related together. Besides, we can increase our knowledge and skills and have a more impressive resume which can provide us for with the work we born for it. Provide s.th for sbProvide sb with sth