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It so obvious some children are mischievousness and noisier than others but they are just children. this is so normal I think if we separate them, they think that they have some problems and this may make them disappointed them , so we should find the solution to tackle/ deal with it In the recent years most people have full time jobs and it’s important they are satisfy satisfied with what they do because is it reflects your feeling about yourself and wr we most must being find/seek ways to increase their job satisfysatisfaction Without a doubt technology has helps helped us in several ways and made our lives easier. I disagree with this opinion that technology makes us forget about traditional skills and history. I think we can keep themthis thing alive with technology I think that is necessary to immunise our children because if we don’t , the risk of illnesses like poliomyelitis increases and if our children are suffering because of our wrong decisions, it brings lot of regret In the years of our life we can’t/cannot always live in the same way because conditions always changes and if we don’t move with new conditions wr we fall behind although we might be live living in a usual way. Even though it is it so way it so delightful but it is impossible

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. In the industrialized societies people every day encounter various advertisements not only in on the radio, TV or billboards, but also in some areas where they do not expect them such as scientific websites or magazines. A runaway increase of products compels necessitate the companies to advertise more effectively in order to take over their rivals. In this regard, although some believe most advertisements present the products better than what they really are, others disagree with this opinion. I personally adopt the position in line with this statement and among numerous reasons, I will outline the most important ones. First and foremost, in the past, there were one or two companies in each specific area which monopolized the products. However, these days, countless factories are producing the same commodities. As a result, they demand advertising to be an advertisement as impressive as possible to attract and entice more consumers and capture/dominate the market. Hence, they endeavor to exaggerate the advantages and understate or even ignore the demerits. As we all know, the high sales of a some merchandise is dependent more on innovative advertisement advertising rather than its quality, so that the advertising psychology has played an important role in this story and each company encompasses various parts among them which the advertising section has become one of the vital categories. Companies are in quest of innovative ideas in order to present their goods efficaciously. The secondly reason I want to mention, there are innumerable supermarkets where which are awash with colorful products and most of the time the consumers get confused as to which commodity is better. In this case, the majority of time people choose the one, which is more attractive regardless of its quality. In the last ten years, the number of academic papers, which have dealt with this issue have increases increased dramatically and this is one of the favorite subjects in cognitive psychology to identify the features of a merchandise, which cognitively affect the decision-making. For instance, most of the academic research indicates that the products with the glossy covers leads to more purchase. The various publications in this field represent the companies̕ inclination toward these issues. However, on the other hand, there are some scientific findings for consumers to know how they can select their products consciously and diminish the effects of advertisements in their decisions. What a mess! To sum up, I believe that technology has made built/created a platform for companies to use the stateof-the-art techniques in order to present their goods more effectively. Besides, the psychology psychological findings have help them to get better understanding of the consumers' ̕ s desire and the ways they can impress them.might be live living in a usual way. Even though it is it so way it so delightful but it is impossible

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the wide demand for petrol has slumped Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective? Nowadays, more individuals use their own cars and the air pollution and traffic jams caused by them have consequently increased. Although some are of the view that making the fuel more expensive is the most proper solution to mitigate the mentioned problems, I believe that there must be other measures to tackle them. By increasing the price of fossil fuels such as petrol, undoubtedly there would be less traffic congestion or environmental pollution but would that really act as a deterrent to all people? I believe people with higher levels of farewell welfare such as ones those from western, developed countries, can yet afford the higher costs of their vehicles’ fuel routinely. To put it simply, people with high income will not bother themselves to leave the car at home and be less convenient just to spend less. Therefore, an absolute solution to such issues will not be guaranteed when such solutions are taken into account. On the contrary, building up infrastructures, governments would be profoundly more successful in mitigating those problems. One of the measures that would decrease traffic jams is providing people with easy-to-reach and low-cost public transportation. By allotting funds to it, the number of commuters using it would rise as they see better options in front of them. Who prefers driving in long rush hours while anxious instead of an effortless commute half the price by a bus? In the same way, other interventions by government should be made to save the environment from being destroyed or polluted and subsidizing environmentfriendly fuels could be conceived as one of the most impactful ones. In conclusion, although raising the cost of petrol would contribute to less crowded and cleaner cities, I believe that more fundamental approaches must be adopted,. the Ones which provide people with better choices that would result in more rigorous solutions.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? In some countries people tend to attain their own home rather than renting it. Mainly, there are two reasons for this phenomenon which I will explore them in the following. First and foremost, in some countries with prices rising every day, life is becoming very hard. the inflation rate is high in some areas, leading to some expenses that you cannot plan for.as a result, people cannot have everything planned down to the penny. Some landlords charge exorbitant rents so no sooner had have newly-married couples maintaining maintained a job than they have to renting an expensive flat. It could be a burden on the shoulder to face other things like recurring bills and needing an unprecedented, expensive repairs, which hangs over them and necessitates maintaining a full-time job, Thereby thereby getting harder and harder to pass up little treats like a movie or a dinner out because there’s there is no money in the budget. As a result, people are seeking logging for finding their own home to be safe than sorry. Looking at the other side, psychological factors play an important role in the tendency to purchase a home. natural human desire for security and prestige Is is a breeding ground for settle settling down. This fact is considered innately desirable for not only humans, but also many other animals. There is a raft of research showing that people feel safe when they have their own property. In conclusion, it is incumbent upon governors to build up an economy based on productivity not accumulation of assets. I strongly believe that the main concern for families shouldn’t be having a house because sooner or later it stops them to flourishing in their abilities and talents because their main concern is to find a flat to live a long life in it. No sooner had I come in than she left No sooner had she opened the gift than she returned it, returned it, returned it

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Are governments doing well in educating people to pay attention to the importance of the food nutrition and healthy eating? Humans’ healthy eating habits are substantially affected by their stressful lifestyle they tend to lead. While many confirm government’s success in drawing people’s attention to caring about their eating habits, I think that it is a totally a considerable failure for the governments because of the increased rate of obesity, a rush of media advertisements and inexpensive junk foods. First of all, by looking around, it is with no doubts clear that many people are becoming overweight and even obese. In fact, obesity has become one of the main and greatest challenges to deal with in many developed societies, especially the United States. Long working hours, hectic lifestyle and a lack of motivation has have forced many not to prepare healthy food for themselves and their families. In fact, many claim that in order to make a nutritious dish, having free time is needed, which is somehow impossible due to work overload. Even when time is not an issue anymore, exhaustion comes in. The situation gets worse when increasing evidence shows the high rate of obesity among children, a majority whose future is threatened by having blood pressure or heart disease. As a consequence, since the majority of diseases are correlated with obesity, the healthcare system is coming under a considerable pressure. Moreover, media has also failed to picture a healthy eating habits, since many platforms are somehow advertising the opposite side. The more people lack time and energy preparing the home-made meals, the more they tend to use convenience food. Unfortunately, media’s role in encouraging people to use such processed foods is undeniable. We rarely see an advertisement about a healthy product, while on the other side, the trend to advertise various kinds of canned foods is growing drastically. Children are also a great target market for eating products such as snacks and cookies, in which we see many ads popping up while they are watching their favorite program. These ads are specifically designed to exaggerate people’s need to such foods, focusing on their fast preparation in the shortest time. Besides, not only are they easy to prepare, they are financially more justified than buying each ingredient for making a meal. As a result, since these commercials are broadcasting widely, many may lose their selfcontrol, craving for more carbohydrate and sugar. Finally, one of the easiest and cheapest eating options are is junk food. For example, McDonald’s price for a hamburger is less than 10 dollars, a price that is totally affordable for the majority of people. It seems that even policy makers do not care about the detrimental effects of having unhealthy meals, since no measure is taken in issuing higher taxes on these products. Therefore, the inevitable consequence is that more people become addicted to junk foods. To sum up, I believe that governments have failed to encourage people in following a healthy diet, as we see its effect on a broken healthcare system, mentally weak individuals and higher rates of addiction.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Many tongues have been extinct throughout the years. Some, however, argue that it is not a concern and living will be straightforward without them. In my opinion, these extinctions can cause many different, critical effects on us, so I disagree with the belief. With disappearing of any language, the related/respective culture will be threatened. No longer do will people understand their history properly since every history and language are correlated, and the historical events spread chest to chest through the main language nuances. Therefore, these deaths can cause a deeply unbridgeable gap between a society and its past, hence the importance of a mother tongue. Furthermore, many works can be meaningless without the connected language, and some beneficial information may not be understandable anymore due to the lack of language. Thus, every way of speaking is vital to its society. Although many say that the smaller number of alive living languages, the simpler lives they will have, a country’s community may be imperiled by the transition between the two languages, and subsequently living in the transition era will be more complicated. Also, today with the rapid pace of technological improvement, especially in data science which helps computers understand a variety of languages, many real-time interpreter applications have emerged/been raised developed to help people understand each other effortlessly by tapping the screen of their cell-phones. For example, by the benefit from those translators, rarely do students need to learn other languages to access some scientific, original articles and books. They can easily use those the software programs to realize the content of a book. With this advancement in technology, students do not need to do the timeconsuming job of learning a new language, thereby spending more time studying. In conclusion, I strongly believe that languages fading out cannot lead us to live easier than before, and keeping them alive is a seemingly reasonable idea.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Among nomerous transformations that modern time has brought, traditional social roles of men and women have also undergone radical changes. The traditional breadwinners of the family, men, are no longer regarded as the only providers, while their female partners tend to work outside the house these days. Although this social transformation happening in the structure of the family is due to several reasons, and it may bring about benefits as well as drawbacks depending on several factors. The line between the female and male reponsibilty has never been more blurred. In fact, the reponsibilities which had been inclucated into/for generations are now changing. Thanks to technology and automation, many of the tasks that used be performed by men through their superior strength are now done by machines and devices. Therefore, physical strength which was for centuries the deciding factor for many jobs started to lose its value. Finding the doors open, women started to bring new approaches, ideas and prespectives to the men's realm. Seizing every opportunity the newcomers, too, oppened new doors for their firms, and the companies welcomed these new bloods who appeared more obedient and less diificult to satisfied. Gradually, they started to step into their male counterparts' shoes. Moving away from a gender-driven society where the streotypical roles have been reversed, or at least have started, may have its own benefits as well as some drawbacks although I believe the former outweighs the latter. First, the male indivduals do are not obliged to work while they are not satisfied with their jobs, and their partners have the privilage to be in work, doing what they enjoy. This presents the father with the opportunity to spend more quality time with the children, thereby developing a better bond with them. Second, both genders are more likely to experiment with what the other mainly faces, which brings about deeper appreciation of the efforts made by their partners. Maybe in a not distant future the term hhousehusband will no longer seem strange since it seems a better option for many of the modern families.

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Q: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? There is a widespread belief that punishing the children as early as possible is essential for teaching them to distinguish right from wrong. While I strongly disagree with the physical and verbal types of punishment, I believe that constructive forms of punishment could be an effective useful method if applied correctly. There are two main reasons why I strongly believe that physical and verbal punishments are not a solution for long-term results. Firstly, corporal punishment, such as slapping or spanking, fails to have a long-lasting effect on children’s misbehavior. The mentioned subject occurs because they will not become selfconscious about their mistakes; Although,, although they will stop their wrong behavior just to avoid punishment. For example, those children who are afraid of getting caught are more cautious about behaving well only in their parents' presence. Secondly, verbal punishment, such as shaming or using cruel words, could seriously harm the children's inner motivation, making it almost impossible for them to find the right way of behaving when their parents are not around to guide them. On the other hand, I consider that using forms of punishment that are positive and constructive could be an effective method for children’s discipline. One constructive punishment could be letting the children choose their own actions while teaching them to take full responsibility for their actions through penalties. Children tend to act according to their ideas of what is right or wrong when encouraged to make decisions and face the resulting consequences. For instance, if a little boy causes serious damage to the TV screen when playing football indoor, the best method to teach him to distinguish between right and wrong is to require him to pay for the damage with money from his pocket money. In conclusion, while I strongly disagree with corporal and verbal punishment, I believe that punishment/retribution, if applied correctly, could be more effective in teaching children to distinguish between right and wrong.

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Many people believe that teaching financial matters to children can be very beneficial but is it always true? Money plays a role in every person’s life and everybody must know the value of it but personally speaking, I do not think elementary school or middle school is the right place for the youth to obtain such lessons. There are several noticeable reasons two of which I will elucidate in the following paragraphs. The first and the most important reason is that a child’s brain should not be filled with these issues. Thinking about money and financial problems for too long can affect a student’s mind and make them sad and depressed. For instance, if a 9 year-old girl thinks too much about monetary problems, she might stop asking for money to buy ice cream or a cute doll that she wants. As a result, she may stop hanging out with her friends and eventually become lonely and bitter. That is why I think a kid’s mind must be clear of money problems. Furthermore, the time spent on conveying how to manage one’s money can be used much better. As we all know, schools play an important role in the future of a student. So maybe the time should be spent on finding out their skills or what the like. Take Ronaldo for example. If he had spent his time on economics and banking instead of learning how to shoot or dribble, he would not have become the amazing football player he is today. So from my point of view, children’s time must not be consumed by finance or business-related subjects. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with preparing children for their financial responsibilities at a young age. A child must enjoy his/her childhood as much he/she can and their her mind and their time should not be involved with monetary issues such as tax or debts. Of course, there is a time and a place for these lessons to be taught and I contend that the best time for them is high school. Dictation:dribble / elementary / taught

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In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those young workers of the company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree or disagree? Today the direct relationship between position in the job and income is completely accepted by almost everyone. However, there are some who believed that this trend is not fair enoughat all. In this essay, I shall examine both sides of the argument. Considering higher income for the Senior positions such as management and superintendent in every organization has a number of advantages.one of the obvious advantages to this trend is that the employees at the moderate and lower department’s hierarchy would appreciate and obey respectfully from their upper-handupper management order. Moreover, it is also true to say that there is always more competition for higher paying jobs and this allows the organizations that has have a fair system of recruitment to choose more talented and skilled personnel among the applicants for the crucial positions. This may help the organization to moving move towards progress and success. On the other hand, the huge difference between the income of the manager and employees in is not only unfair/an improper approach but also could lead to some problems. In these cases, the staffs would probably lose their ambitions to make the best of their worktime and they may gradually become disappointed because they feel that all of their efforts and loyalty have been ignored. To conclude, although I see nothing worse wrong with considering higher salary for the senior positions, employers in every company and organization must pay special attention to the demands and interests of their employees from the lowest to highest position and always try to keep their committed and hardworking employees satisfysatisfied.