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It is said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a direct result of the rapid development of telecommunications technology and travel industry has negative effects on individuals, nations, and the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In this day and age due to the hectic pace of life, rarely do people find time to have physical activities or travel to see other cultures or just relax far from the sedentary lifestyle most of us are used to. Though attractive the technological achievements may seem at first, these developments specifically in telecommunications and travel industry backfire if we fail to manage them. This short essay elaborates on this hot debate, mainly focusing on the impacts of technological advances of travel and telecommunications industry. Thanks to the recent telecommunications solutions, nowadays even ordinary members of society are able to enjoy the fruits of telecommunications advances such as smartphones, different social media, and most notably the Internet. Though such solutions have made our life easier and more often than not more enjoyable, the drawbacks of them such as isolation from real life should not be overlooked. Many a person suffers from different kinds of mental disorders only because of overuse of the internet and being drowned in/soaked into the virtual world. Getting used to sedentary lifestyle is another demerit of telecommunications advances which help us not to leave home for a wide range of activities that as late as 20 years ago we used to leave our home to do them. Over the last half century, the travel industry has changed in a way that people from different social strata can travel to tourist resorts with affordably attractive offers, but the question is what percentage of those affording to pay for such tempting travels spend their leisure time traveling? An overwhelming majority of individuals do not have time to spend what they earned. They are just working and making money and regrettably under the pressure of heavy duties often cannot travel. A case in point is my manager who is a workaholic spending most his time at the office, and does not have time to see his close friends, let alone his parents living in Karaj, a city near Tehran where his office is located. To cut a long story short, I can say that although our developments in telecommunications and travel industry may seem like a real achievement at first, the respective disadvantages of them cannot be overlooked. We have to benefit from them in a wiser way which then we can consider them a true achievement.

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Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Now a daynowadays, in thea modern world, the importance of information technology has increases increased, and creating the platform to access up-to-date data is the main goal of the information companies. The Internet is the chief way providing state-of-the-art materials. However, it is an old conflict whether the internet prepares efficient information. Although some believe that via the internet we encounter are exposed to countless unlimited information, which can be considered the negative aspect, I deem the strengths of the internet outweigh its weaknesses. I will outline my opinion and point out the most vital reasons in the following paragraphs. First of all, in this day and age, the speed of human knowledge in various fields such as medicine has increases increaseed without cease. The information and statistics are changing moment by moment and if your information sources are based on physical books, that makes you to purchase the new ones in order to accede to new information, which is costly. However, thanks to the internet, you get up-tothe-minute information effortlessly. For instance, when I was working on my master project two years ago, which lasted about a year, instead of getting information through physical books in the library which were too limited, I could easily search and gather the new information from online libraries and revise my thesis. Via the internet, we access the information beyond the border and that is the uniqueness of the internet. Furthermore, the internet is a profitable instrument for students to solve their educational problems. There are numerous videos in on some websites such as YouTube explaining the educational materials in each grade. However, in the past, we had to get a private tutor and expend a lot of money to overcome overcoming the educational questions. You can even start to learn a new software or a new language step by step via innumerable, handy videos or applications in on the internet. Many language applications such as Duolingo are so practical to this means and you can also find the new learnersones, who are learning the same language and share your experiences or get help from each other. It is possible thanks to the internet to communicate with so many native speakers in order to improve your speaking skill. In addition, the internet has broken bring down the borders of countries and has made it easier for people to communicate to with each other in spite of physical distances. Although the various materials of social media can deflect us from our goal, which we are searching for, they make it possible to connect to others, to make new relationships and to be in touch with your families or friends who live in other countries. To sum up, all devices or instruments have some disadvantages and the internet is not an exemption. However, it is our art to minimize itsthe shortcoming of.

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In times of an economic crisis, in which area should governments reduce their spending? 1. Arts 2. Scientific research 3. Parks and public gardens. A country facing a financial crisis should takes various measures, alleviating the hardship that is threatening people’s lives. As for governments it necessitates immediate actions to control their expenditures on costly areas, there has been much discussion revolving around whether cost decreasing should be in arts, scientific research or parks and public garden, which in this case I believe that it should be arts because not all the people can afford being involved in artistic activities, the budget can be allocated for research teams to overcome the crisis sooner and parks are more popular and cheaper locations for entertainingentertainment. First of all, in a country where a considerable number of its citizens are dealing with financial issues as a result of an economic crisis, it is not reasonable to spend too much large a budget on artistic areas. Usually, the costs for preserving museums or building art galleries are enormous and even by having such facilities, still many people cannot afford to pay for tickets. It is clear that the governmental expenditures should be financially justified, where they make sure that it is a money making business which can provide more wealth for the sake of society. When these places are visited by only the upper class of society, how such venues are going to make money and generate financial profit for the government? As a result, the less budget is allocated for these kinds of activities, the more substantial funding goes to health-related issues. Moreover, science in many ways has helped humans overcome their obstacles, whether it they areis medical, technological or in this case an economic crisis. Consider the pandemic of corona virus that where the world is facing one of its deepest economic challenges in of all the time. Faced with high rates of unemployment, many countries have increased their budget in scientific research in order to find a vaccine. Besides, in times of crisis, economic experts can carry out studies as to what instant measures need to be taken, such as what governments can do in cases of unemployment, budget deficit and widespread corruption. As a consequence, the more a society increases research budgets, the better it can survive through hardships. Finally, not only it isis it necessary for societies to take practical measures to prevent an economic disaster, people’s mental status is also of great importance. Depression, anger and learned helplessness are common symptoms that may arise during an economic crises. Parks and public gardens are one of the most convenient locations that can entertain a vast majority of people. Being in nature has a healing effect on people’s psyche. Besides, without paying any extra money, people can play outdoor games or communicate togetherwith one another. Therefore, not only do many individuals benefit from such a cheerful atmosphere, it also is more economical for governments to prepare these facilities rather than promoting art-related activities.To sum up, among all the options, I think that it is necessary to reduce government’s spending in art, because in this way societies can dedicate more money to dealing with health problems, reach to economic stability faster and manage their expenditures.

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For schools, assessing teachers' teaching efficiency is a very important issue. But is it better to let other teachers assess a teacher's efficiency or to allow the students to do the assessment? It is stating the obvious that education plays a paramount role in humans' life which no one can ever deny teachers have a significant task. That having has been considered in this in perspective, whether teachers are evaluated by students or other teachers. Despite the arguments asserting that it is acceptable that teachers should be assessed by other teachers, I believe otherwise, maintaining that they should avoid evaluating by teachers. Such views on the grounds that they have spend more time with students and it is not fair they are assessed by other teachers. First and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact teachers spend most of their time with pupils and in classes. Strictly speaking, students have the better understanding of the quality of teachers' work and positive and negative points of their behavior as a teacher. The best example, teachers who use old material to teach instead of up-to-date one; thus students will not be satisfied with this issue. Therefore, it goes without saying that, students are more able to assess teachers' abilities and weaknesses than anyone else. Another striking point is that it is not just teachers be assessed by other teachers. To put it in apposite words, fundamentally, they are not familiar with each other's teaching methods, so it is not fair if they are evaluated by themselves. As a case in point, some teachers prefer to teach math with play which will be conducive to learning better. On the other hand, others deemed it can backfire. Admittedly, it might be argued if teachers are evaluated by other teachers, it will be practical. The proponents of this argument hold that teachers are mature enough to distinguish between right and wrong and also they do not get emotional decisions because if pupils are attracted to their teachers, they cannot comment precisely. However, this attitude is nothing but a tunnel-vision that fails to consider the fact that a few students can be interested in a teacher simultaneously. To cut a long story short, although some people maintain that assessing teachers' efficiency will be more beneficial, if evaluated by other teachers, I strongly believe students have more profits in terms of being fair. Besides, teachers spend more time with pupils in classes, so students are realized aware of their teacher's strengths and weaknesses.

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126 Nowadays, owing to fast growth in a number of national economies, having especial potential such as huge revenues which are resulted result fromby fossil fuels, businesses have boomed and government’s revenues have risen/are increased. Because of that conspicuous income, the governments start to invest in cities which in turn cause inhabitants’ welfare and sometimes rural areas will be forgotten. Although economic development seems like a reasonable achievement for countries, the unfair distribution of revenue can cause negative effects. Governments, having a high- pace development in their economiceconomy, focus to on improve improving life situation in cites and invest in infrastructures of the cites such as building sport complexes, developing public transportation as well as programing planning to improve health care situations while the rural areas might be forgotten. As a result of the above mentioned neglect, the countryside are is not suitable and attractive place for living of people especially for the young people who are looking for better life. Because they do not have not enough facilities for learning or starting business in comparison with the people who arethose living in big cities, as a result, they will immigrate to cities. Genocides crime and poverty are the direct results of this exodus. They cannot find a moneymaker moneymaking job and that ensues from have having not sufficient skill and which leads them to poor life and crimes. Governments have to take/adopt a proper strategies to alleviate those problems such as investing some amounts of their raised revenue in the countryside and increase their living standard. Decreasing the unemployment, preparing suitable facilities for health and education are some of the necessary actions that they can do to reduce/minimize/mitigate this these problems. All summed up, if the governments who have rapid economic development cannot fairly manage and distribute the facilities in all regions of the country and among their citizenship they will be faced with many social problems.

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