Fridays http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19 Sat, 04 May 2024 08:02:33 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) Food, Arefeh http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1037-food-arefeh-ielts-toefl-writing-sample http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1037-food-arefeh-ielts-toefl-writing-sample  

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The range and quality of food we can buy has changed due to technological and scientific advances. Some people believe the range and quality of food has improved while others consider it may be harmful. Discuss both points of views and give your opinion. Technological developments have evolved the world around us in many ways one of which is the food industry. Many ponder that this transition in food production is positive whether quantity and quality-wise (or in terms of quantity) whilst others believe that it is widely detrimental. These days the preparation of food is much easier rather than the past. In fact it is absolutely adjusted to our modern life where we struggle with time shortage because of the hectic pace of life. It is so helpful that we can create a dish in the blink of an eye, because of the ingredient diversity including various raw materials and ready meals in different tastes, and much more besides. Not only do those options bring about an effortless supply of food, but also they satisfy almost all tastes. However, the facilities that are brought with food development should not to lead to ignoring bring about to renounce a large number amount of detriments comprising Food additives which are chemical substances to change the taste or appearance of the food or to preserve it which are harmful for our long-term health and the Processed food that is another by product which is treated as part of an industrial operation and worse than all is GM food. Genetically modified products pose some problems such as resistance loss to diseases and causing some serious problems in the development of organs such as the kidney and the spleen. Not only do they entails dire consequences for current consumers but also for posterity. In conclusion, I would argue if relevant organizations consider crop yields nutritionally as much as the amount of productions, it will be more beneficial for consumers. To this end, primarily the agricultural industry can benefits from traditional methods in the process of growing crops so that it leads to people consuming more organic food rather than synthetic. Arefeh

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How Travel, Morteza http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1036-how-travel-morteza-ielts-toefl-writing-sample http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1036-how-travel-morteza-ielts-toefl-writing-sample  

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Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Some people believe that the best way to spend a holiday in a foreign country is to go out to meet people, instead of staying in hotel most of the time. What is your opinion? Give reasons include relevant examples of your own experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is understandable that people having had to work in a stressful ambience would rather to travel on an all-inclusive tour in which all they need is provided within the hotel where they can rest and fully recharge their batteries. Yet, my travels have been and will be planned to achieve further goals. Before planning a journey for a holiday, everyone has a questionnaire to fill out in all with the individual answers. There need to be questions about how long the travel is going to be, who they want to go with and where they want to go which all depends on the goal of the travel per se. Providing travellers ed with literally everything, some hotels leave the people with nothing to go out for. In Antalya, for instance, and in one of the five-star hotels where everything is handy and unbelievably convenient to use, people consequently will not find any reason to leave the hotel for, not to get in touch with the world outdoors nor for going to a restaurant or a pub, for example. [They might also ponder why to leave such a pleasant comfort and comfortable pleasure, why now that they have paid for any single moment of their stay and all the thoroughly enjoyable things all in hand.] Aimed for a variety of purposes, a travel could still be planned eminently differently. There are many to whom travel means something more than relaxation and entertainment, something entirely novel/unalike. [In other words, Not only do they travel to get some rest and be prepared for the working days to come, but to learn new things, be enough in nature enough and get introduced to other cultures and people of different ethnicities, their ancestors’ monuments, traditions and beliefs as well as the way they live and what they live on.] Through Going on such journeys people make the most of their free time which is to (the) many quite a better plan on which one could travel. Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Followed from the above, as someone whose experience includes both aforementioned travel types, [I will definitely highly warily choose the places I go to and the things I would spend my time on not as a whole nor regarded as serving a single purpose but one by one according to why I would be travelling whether to relax and/or to visit somewhere or someone or else. Still,] rarely would I opt for the former travel type excluding everything but rest and entertainment.

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Poverty, Maryam Ahadpour http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1035-poverty-maryam-ahadpour-ielts-toefl-writing-sample http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1035-poverty-maryam-ahadpour-ielts-toefl-writing-sample  

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TOPIC: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? What can we do to help the poor? Over the first half of the last century, the growth of the world population caused a large the absolute number of poor people in the world to increase. It must be noted that is significant to say that there is no single reason for poverty. In other words, there are many factors on which poverty depends. This essay will discuss some of the reasons for the poverty and what can be done to prevent it. For a number of reasons, poverty has become an issue in many countries all around the world. Illiteracy is one of the major factors that has have contributed immensely to in poverty. It is often seen that people are reluctant to send their children to educational institutions in poor countries. These institutions could offer assistance in changing their destiny. Despite of its benefits, people would like their children to get involved in dulge their children in some paid work, which couldn't help significantly in altering their present conditions. Some countries have a large population of poor people due to duo to the poor performance of the government. For example, in totalitarian governments under the dictatorial president ship, many people are facing problems such as starvation, unemployment, inflation and unstable economic conditions which lead to broaden widening the gap between the rich and the poor. Some nations have poverty-stricken people in their areas because they are lazy and not uninterested in working. Certain countries like Africans are facing poverty problems as a result of unfavorable geographical locations. Actions like establishing employment opportunities for lowlaw-income and disadvantageds families, ensuring minimum levels of health care services are few examples among several measures to address this challenge/poverty globally and redress the imbalance in societies. To this end, provision of financial support by governments should be a high priority to improve economic growth and help the poor. In conclusion, undeniably governments have a crucial role to play in eradicating poverty from society but the governments cannot prevent poverty solely, nor can individuals undertake such a formidable task. Therefore, it calls for joint action between both parties.

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Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.19 Fri, 09 Dec 2016 14:32:26 +0000
Space Exploration, Maryam Ghavamian http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1034-space-exploration-maryam-ghavamian-ielts-toefl-writing-sample http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1034-space-exploration-maryam-ghavamian-ielts-toefl-writing-sample  

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Maryam Ghavamian Some people think that money spent on space exploration is a waste and could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society. To what extent do you agree? It is true that there are many issues on the Earth to deal with peruse, and it would be better off to investigate on the resolution of these to live longer here rather than spending much money on the space to invent the unseen universe which may be useless as well. On the one hand, we are living on Earth with the rise of population at an alarming rate, and also the resources are finishing every day everyday being a great threat to our future life on the Earth. The more people live, the more much food, drinking water, nonpolluted air is needed. Therefore, it seems any investigation to improve the life should be focused just on the place of living (living place?), not very far in an unknown world. If we conduct any survey to produce more qualified food with the aid of modern technologies in a short time, we would pave the way for having to have a better life for the next generation and it would be feasible to live longer on Earth despite of the planet’s issues in recent decades. For instance, these days many people are suffering from new incurable diseases triggered by dangerous viruses such as Zika transmitting the virus via mosquitos. If we do not spend the needed money to develop devise the vaccines and drugs to tackle those challenges with, the people would die in a large scale in near future. On the other hand, in space we might find the possibility of living on other planets which would be definitely precious in future, so it is vital to define some budget in this field. If one day the humans could not live any more on Earth, we the people would have the opportunity to travel to space to live on other places such as Mars or the Moon, consequently the world would not be ended. For example, the water is running out on Earth because since of climate change, if we find water anywhere else we hope to be able to live there too. In addition, by exploring the space and other planets, we Maryam Ghavamian might discover some valuable resources, and also find out how to exploit adopt them here for subsequent enhancement. In conclusion, although we have many undeniable considerations to cope with which most of themmost of which cause the growth of expenditure, exploring the space would be beneficial to the current world even if we had have to stay on Earth forever.

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Stress and Risk, Kiarash http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1033-stress-and-risk-kiarash-ielts-toefl-writing-sample http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1033-stress-and-risk-kiarash-ielts-toefl-writing-sample  

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Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that stress and risk can provide such a kind of condition that a person does his bestthe best of his effort. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that just by knowledge and using old-fashioned material prosperity can be achievable. I, to a great extent, agree with the idea that prosperous people should always experience something new to achieve more success. First and foremost, a highly educated persons knows that just with scholastic lessons and the curricular materials which is are taught in university an individual cannot run a business. Today a person can achieve to his goal just by trying and experiencing some risk and only by jeopardizing his situation to reach significant goal. for example, if a person does not have (has not) any idea about an issue and does not have adequate time to learn that, and moreover, has to do in a limited time just he has two options. One is to withdraw and accept his defeat for tackling the problem; , the other one and rational is to take the risk and just by his initiative does what he thinks that would be more accurate and can resolve the issue. Therefore, he will do the risky option. this facilitates his position and brings up the success for him. In addition, another significant fact which should be taken into consideration is that if a person in a company or in upper levels of management just relies on his own intuition and does not look for some new approaches for facing problems, he will not promote his position. Therefore, the best way which plays a vital roles in all the people's life is to take some risky measurements to earn what they want in their life. Finally, if a person did not take a risk, he would not cope with the unstable and unsolvable problems so just he has to make his decision and confidently choose the risky way. Another view point is when a person looks to successful people's life he perceives that all of them took at least one risky option which made them successful or failed them so there are lots of people who which emulate the ways of superiors. Despite of the result of the action a person improves his confidence and learns that in harsh conditions he must take risks. On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am totally convinced that humanity human-being means to do what animals cannot do and one of them one of which is based to underlie on your options and by your feeling and intention choose the dangerous way which brings you success and because of the ideas mentioned above in a nutshell, the triumph and success can be reached by taking risks.

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Writing Workshop Friday 95.09.19 Fri, 09 Dec 2016 14:31:34 +0000
Stress, Sanaz Nasr http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1032-stress-sanaz-nasr-ielts-toefl-writing-sample http://sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/184-fridays-writing-workshop-1395/writing-workshop-friday-95-09-19/1032-stress-sanaz-nasr-ielts-toefl-writing-sample  

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In recent years, life has become more stressful than it has ever been. As a consequence, more and more people are suffering from stress-related problems. What factors are contributing to this increase and what do you think can be done to overcome the current problem? Stress and stress-related illness is are an unavoidable consequence of urbanization that most of us now are grappling with lead to. There are several factors at play in this case. The key factor lays lies under is the ever growing complexity of modern life, which changes and constantly goes forward way to frequently and pervades every aspect of life. In less than half a century ago, people were guaranteed by a job for their lifetime, but this is no longer the case. Nowadays, people are obliged to alter their profession more than once during their life. From my perspective, the main reason is developing technology; for instance, computerizing playsed a pivotal role in this case as to because of doing work faster and of course being accurate. Thus, as a result of population growth people who are up-to-date and scouring for opportunities will immediately take the place of less skilled people. Another problem which arises arouse from overpopulation is resources such as food and land or services namely hospitals and public transportation become more scarce scares and expensive. It This is true that there are numerous issues to be worriedy about in our lives and they are continuing to grow, but there are actions to cope with them too; for example, embarking upon a campaign for stressawareness to make people aware of how to tackle with stress by yoga or having quality time with relatives relevant that boosts morale. In addition, employers must be involved by running relaxation courses to reduce stress at the workplace. Referring to the aforementioned discussion, the problems are here and the solutions as well. human beings have the capacity to adapt and survive.

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